Well, you should fiddle some more with the text until you get it right. You're on the right track. And a tip to make the house symbols more visible: just duplicate them, as many times as it's needed.
You probably used bevel and emboss for the text, but you need to tweak the settings so it fits your slim font. Other than that, well done.
Signature violates 1.7, please resize:
1.7 - Pictures that exceed 700px width or signatures that exceed 700*250px*3 MB are not allowed on the forum.
Mephistoles