I like the new one Serpentis.
It doesn't feel 'flat', its got depth and motion.
If I have to nit-pick, I think the two smaller ships look like they were about to collide. Maybe have them firing on each other if jousting? Perhaps have them vectored together? or one flat, as if it was incoming?
I dunno, I like it.
You don't see that close camera view often.
Makes it feel real.
EDIT: Wups -'Pub Mode' meant to post as Finnegan. *smiles*