' Wrote:I told myself this was going to be a masterpiece.
I was disappointed.
It's a nice concept, but too linear IMO... Hard to describe. For one, it looks lopsided. So much action on one side, none on the other. I feel like the feathering on the render is too much. Cut him out a little sharper, the black haze against the sides of his neck is off-putting. Otherwise all I can critique is the color choice on the name, but that's your prerogative.
I like the color scheme and the makeshift armada of ships. Interesting idea, and it could look quite nice. The render is very good too.