' Wrote:It's a nice concept, but too linear IMO... Hard to describe. For one, it looks lopsided. So much action on one side, none on the other. I feel like the feathering on the render is too much. Cut him out a little sharper, the black haze against the sides of his neck is off-putting. Otherwise all I can critique is the color choice on the name, but that's your prerogative.
I like the color scheme and the makeshift armada of ships. Interesting idea, and it could look quite nice. The render is very good too.
Good critique, I appreciate it. Thanks for spotting the edges on the focal since I did that part in a rush. It's hard to balance sharpness on cut out edges because if they're too sharp blending would become difficult.
About the composition, eh, I thought hard about that. In the end I decided to settle with this or a clean original background. It may seem heavy on one side but that's just the contrast and shape which alludes you to think so. I'll post the original version soon enough, once I have time to find my files again.
Oh, the name's colour is based on Cryer Pharmaceutical logo scheme. Now you know why.
Anyway, I've said enough. Back to my inspiration chamber I go.