The overall work is kind of eye catching, but to me it doesn't look like a Transmission Bar at all. To my eye, it is a buncha FX.
I looked at it again...Couple of more things.
The guy's face doesn't really fit in. As I said, it is a transmission bar and I take it literally. To me, it is a some sort of a terminal, personal PDA, etc...
Perhaps the very top layers ( 0 ) ) ) the wings ( ) and the center piece 0 could be connected together with some sort of frame or wiring. It is not that hard to do, but would connect them together more solid, giving it a feel of unity.
The bottom layer, where ONLINE is, perhaps a different interface brush and slightly different coloring.
I still say: The project is eye catching, but seems raw and incomplete, just like a lot of your other projects.
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