I originally wasn't going to have a feedback thread, but after getting this:
Maj. Voelkel Wrote:Project Transcendence is a masterpiece. Keep it up.
[18:41:05] Pilgrim: Hey Akura
[18:41:23] Pilgrim: that's one of the best stories I've ever read
[18:41:46] Dave (Akura): Which one?
[18:42:03] Pilgrim: Project Transcendence
[18:42:08] Dave (Akura): Oh, thanks
I thought maybe I'd leave a place for you to leave your thoughts on the story, critisism, suggestions and general thoughts on Georgia Brown as a character.
Tell me what I'm doing right, what needs improving and what you think I should do.
Zealot Wrote:Just go play the game and have fun dammit.
Treewyrm Wrote:all in all the conclusion is that disco doesn't need antagonist factions, it doesn't need phantoms, it doesn't need nomads, it doesn't need coalition and it doesn't need many other things, no AIs, the game is hijacked by morons to confuse the game with their dickwaving generic competition games mixed up with troll-of-the-day.
I really like your way of writting the stories (well this feedback is only for P.Transcendence, but I'll include The Siren too). Please, never give up!
I love your stories. Its the only one that I have read completely.
The most amazing thing that sets this story apart is how well the various screen shots and pictures are spaced throughout the story. They appear at the right time and and at the right place and all of them fit so well into the story. Very well edited and very neatly presented.