So, yeah. Feedback on anything I've written would be appreciated.
Character story links are in my signature, and for anything else, just search the roleplay section for posts by my username. Should give you some results.
Feedback on the Perihelion would be especially appreciated, not just on the recently posted story but on my ingame roleplay as well.
Characters Alan Markson: The Hellfire Legion's Lord Commander The Perihelion: Freeport Four's guardian, and yet much more. Missing and assumed Lost with all hands. Eric Dresmund: Junker, smuggler, thief. Last seen drunk on Beaumont Vayrn Wyard: IMG Recon pilot turned Neo-Terran Captain. Last location unknown
Personally, I like the work you have put into for the Perihelion
IMG| has spoken to you before, general consensus is that we like your RP, despite you having a Zephyr thats not in the official guild.
I have actually tried to get a few of the defense guys to place some extra wings down there in case you ever need them. I made a bomber character and put him at the freeport as backup for your ship, just in case.
I haven't really had a RP experience with you in-game, but from what i see on the forums, i like what i see.