From one sunset to another

[louis_forgeron]

Welcome.
I know reading walls-of-text is not always pleasant, especially when the writer is not a native English speaker. So I'll be trying to compensate with crappy pictures "upgraded" with my weak photoshop/GIMP skills.

At this moment I'm enjoying the RP more than the game itself, so I'll probably continue the story for a while.

All kind of feedback is welcome here.

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RP/BIO RP-Feedback

[Thyrzul]

I would like to ask a few questions.

How and when did Armand get from Gallia to the other end of Sirius, eventually ending up to work for a Rheinlander company?

How did he manage to get nothing less than a Colossus, Rheinland's biggest transport (I guess) as deep into Gallic controlled space as Nevers orbit?

Overall it's cool, the pic's are nice. Keep it up.

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[louis_forgeron]

I would like to ask a few questions.

How and when did Armand get from Gallia to the other end of Sirius, eventually ending up to work for a Rheinlander company?

How did he manage to get nothing less than a Colossus, Rheinland's biggest transport (I guess) as deep into Gallic controlled space as Nevers orbit?

Overall it's cool, the pic's are nice. Keep it up.

I'm getting there:) He'll tell the story himself, when I find him.

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RP/BIO RP-Feedback

[Thyrzul]

Well, I asked these because these are the points making me a bit sceptical about the story fitting well.

The first question could be answered a bit more easily than the second one, as he had like 1 year or so (I guess that much ago was the breach on the Languedoc field) to leave Gallia. But then you are talking about "years", which make it a bit weird.

The second issue is that Gallia and the Royal Navy and Police takes foreign ships very strictly. Moreover they have little to no contact with Rheinland. I could imagne some of the police officer's faces when they spotted a big green ship of unknown origin or purpose right next to Nevers.

However I base my comments on my knowledge and rp experience which may not be entirely accurate as I play here only for months yet, so it can be possible that I am wrong in some of the details.

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[louis_forgeron]

I know, I know.

Truth be told, I went for the epic visual imagery of the sun setting over a gigantic ship, rather than for logic and reason.Which only means that now I have to come up with a convoluted story that would explain all of this, and be fairly easy to render in words/images, and I'll have to like it, too.

Quite the challenge. I'll see what I can muster.

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RP/BIO RP-Feedback

[Thyrzul]

Yeah, I just found this:

And given that as I have nothing from the lore saying Rhenland corps are allowed anywhere near Gallia, added to the fact that Kusari is listed as it's only trading partner, I cannot unhack those IDs. When and if the lore supoorts such a step, it will be made.

I think Gallia has it's corporations and huge haulers as well, I think a Pachyderme could replace the Colossus. Either this or some Kusarian stuff as they are the only trade partners of Gallia (as stated above).

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