Its still quite open ended, and Im not entirely sure in what direction I am wanting to take her, but hey, Its a great distraction from study and that is all I'm after right now. She is my newest addition to discovery, a young girl that fights for what she believes is right, even though the methods she uses are far from ideal.
The posts with no name are her own, and the ones with are who she meets there (Also linked here for my records.).
You've certainly put alot of time and effort into constructing Hannah's story, and it shows with a quality story that I continue to enjoy reading about. I like how the main story is written in first person. It makes the story more immersive as you start to imagine yourself as Hannah when she describes what has happened.
The inclusion of Hannah's arch nemisis Victor, (kudos to Buster ) is a nice addition to the story, as you get to see her in action. And Its always a pleasure chatting at the West wing pub;)
' Wrote:I've already told you, but I'll say it again:)
It was different, not your usual stuff, and an enjoyable read.
Can't wait for more ^_^
Thanks :ylove:
Still trying to expand it a bit, get her a bit more known around the place.
Its actually become quite a fun little project.
' Wrote:That is one pretty girl :nyam:
Hehe, yep.
She is a real life model, a lot of underwear, so finding... forum appropriate.. pictures was interesting at first. (Stephanie Van Rijn is her name.)
' Wrote:You've certainly put alot of time and effort into constructing Hannah's story, and it shows with a quality story that I continue to enjoy reading about. I like how the main story is written in first person. It makes the story more immersive as you start to imagine yourself as Hannah when she describes what has happened.
The inclusion of Hannah's arch nemisis Victor, (kudos to Buster ) is a nice addition to the story, as you get to see her in action. And Its always a pleasure chatting at the West wing pub;)
Took some getting use to writing in first person, especially since my story writing skills aren't fantastic at the best of times. I second the Kudos to Buster, its great having a character like that. Get to roleplay all sides of Hannah (Or Stephany, as Bryan knows her now), give her more - character, I guess?
I think it might be time to stop hijacking Barrier and make a new thread though :cool: