Hey everyone. This is a suggestions thread for my characters life story. It can be found here.If you have any suggestions please feel free to post in here. I was hoping that after the Okinawa is destroyed another person might post in the thread as a rescue ship which rescues the escape pods from the Okinawa, cause obviously they need to make it back to human space. But all suggestions must please go in here first! Let us together make this a story to remember!
I quite liked that begining and i feel that to continue you need to jump a few years till when alastair is a young teen, show how hes grown what he aspires to do who he involves himself with just to give us the idea of who this guy really is.
"You have ruled this galaxy for ten thousand years, yet have little of account to show for your efforts. Such failure must be depressing to bear as it is pathetic to behold."
-Imotekh the Stormlord
(05-12-2013, 07:46 PM)Kornpatch Wrote: I quite liked that begining and i feel that to continue you need to jump a few years till when alastair is a young teen, show how hes grown what he aspires to do who he involves himself with just to give us the idea of who this guy really is.
Thanks Patch I will keep that in mind! That's the plan. Including a story about a couple of runs with your Rhineland character
Thank you, i will keep pumping them creative juices.
"You have ruled this galaxy for ten thousand years, yet have little of account to show for your efforts. Such failure must be depressing to bear as it is pathetic to behold."
-Imotekh the Stormlord