' Wrote:History: Me and 4 friends were badly in need of money. With no other solution we joined the KNF. This did not go well. After days of hard work they only gave us a small amount of credits. Seeing no future here, we betray them.
Sounds like an epic start of a faction.
' Wrote:Enraged, we joined the Blood dragons but we didnt fit in. So we tried joining the GC but we didnt fit there either.
So we made our own rebellion. The Night Ravens.
And now? Did the Night Ravens gave you money? Again... good reason to start a faction..
In my humble opinion, revenge should be the last factor for somebody to create a faction. I see no relevant background story here, no political connection, no basis of existance at all... (Except for the epic 'We didn't get money, so we betrayed them.')
Give us some tension, some compelling story or something like that.
' Wrote:Note to self: Find better RP reason to want to kill the kusari gov.
Look, if this is the base of your RP, to kill somebody out of weird reasons... come on. Nobody will respect that. Clear the reasons of your blood thirst first, before doing something else.
Don't threat me, but this is as foggy as the basis of existance of the KoF...
Note to everyone, this is not a faction creation request, as in it's current form it wouldn't make the grade.
No where near enough information, and just wanting to kill the Kusari Government is not going to get you
anywhere. I suggest you read the stickies here, before you go any further.
Locked till then.
Hoodlum
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