' Wrote:Hey Calego, those look good. I was also looking for such a demonstration in the back ground, but I found nothing, unfortunately.:P
And I like the way you design the borders.
yeah it took a while to find the angry mob...
' Wrote:Calego, yours are quite 'busy' if you get what I mean. My eye's being drawn all around.
hmmm... I'll see what I can do.
' Wrote:@Calego While they're looking quite nice, they're also rather busy. Also, the planets don't quite say "Rheinland" to me. They seem a good foundation though!
I'll see if i can make it seem less busy, and I'll make the Planets more Rhinlandish... Soon hopefully
No telling when I'll be back online after this because we're moving locations again. I should be able to get on though. So bear with me.
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I'm back , unfortunately the fish decided that they weren't hungry so I didn't catch anything... Ahh well , happens I suppose.
Anyway , back on topic.
Ventana ~ Your last work of art is actually pretty darn nice. However , I think that the text -Volksfront Partei- is a little bid hard to read. If you can do something about that. The name bar , it's too red , if you can make if a bit lighter in color or perhaps even use the same copper color as the rest of the signature. Now , the dark red looks like it's out of place.
Calego ~ Your signature is incredibly detailed , I can clearly see that you've put up a lot of work. I like how you mixed many different aspects of what I wanted to see in our signature , but the problem is that , like Ben said , it's just too much. Also , try making it a bit smaller in size and perhaps change the overall shape of the signature , it looks too "precise" now. Furthermore , the text is a bit hard to read.
All in all , I'm pleased about how things are turning up. Keep up the good work.
ed_philips - Nice signature , I like the idea and the composition of the elements. However , there seems to be too much room in the folders with texts in them. Perhaps tightening it up a bit . Also , the quality of the image doesn't look so good , if you clean it up a bit it might look better.
ok made a lot of variations this time around:
original Full:
No side message:
Only the Background and vital forground:
With the angry mob only:
With Brushcal Base only:
I decided to drop the planets...Brushcal Base is more Volksfront like... seeing as how its your main base. Also added the "brown of the earth tilled" to the color scheme... Couldn't really do much to aid the fullness/business though, except by removing one or more parts...
If you want something modified, say which variation you like best so I don't need to make them all again.;)
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I'm leaning towards yours. I really like it. Only a few things that I think it needs to get fixed: The letters, like Eternal and Ktayn said, are a bit difficult to read. If you could either reduce the width of the letters and increase the spacing between them, or reduce the shadow, it would be great. Just need the name to be clear. As it is, I find it somewhat challenging to read; not what you want with your name.
The name folder section I don't have much of a problem with, just make it a tad less bold. The focus is on the Volksfront, not the member's name.
The guy and the family also need some cleaning up. Mostly with the shield and his head/shoulder.
Calego,
Your signature is damn nice. Bright, colourful, and bold. Everything you need if you're trying to sell... something. Unfortunately, we're a political movement, not a corporation or brand name. We want to restore Rheinland to its glory, to create a new regime. I don't think your style is ideal for an ideology. Thanks for the attempt, it really is good, but I don't think it's what we're looking for.
ed_philips,
I appreciate the try, but I don't think we're going to go with it. I can see you're trying hard, and with practice, you've got potential. At the moment, however, I don't believe you have the quality of skills we require. Also, just hitting "sharpen" doesn't make the image sharper. It simply brings out the subtleties more. I think that your first try looks better than the second, if only because it is less noisy and grainy. The second one just has too many artifacts floating about.