Hello I am in Disco for a long run this time, so I'd like to ask people to help me out in improving my RP with criticism, because I probably should do that before I make a dumb mistake for the nth time.
For some context, I value live RP greatly over forumlancing because of personal preferences and because I take too long at writing for forumlancing. My roleplaying style is very reactionary and in-the-moment based, so to speak: I am not good at describing areas, and I don't care about making detailed or impactful stories, I care about creating moments and playing characters as things happen. Therefore, expect that most of my forumlancing will consist of diary entries, talking to people, outright importing in-game logs, or seemingly disjointed and isolated events if I'm feeling particularly uncreative.
tl;dr Please criticize my roleplaying in-game and in the forums. I rp in-game more often than in the forums because I suck at writing but I am better at interacting.
Also, I try to tie my Stories & Biographies threads to relevant Communications Channel threads that I post in, so you don't have to search!!
-Kalan Yamato, a Freelancer turned to LSF (2010/2011) This was my first roleplay in Discovery. I was 13 years old at the time, so you can expect quality out of this one. I update my current character roster (which has more characters) frequently on my profile.
