Well, it is pretty basic, but no major issues, pretty good for an introduction. Kudos for you for going for a little bit older character, I think they turn out to be more interesting than all the tweenies ace pilots we get. Well, I am nobody to talk, but people tend to go for some kind of visual formatting in their RP posts, and while it is not a neccessity it certainly adds a bit of flair to the post. Waiting for more point of view 1st person bits, they add to the character quite a bit. Also, looking forward to meeting Arin in-game, good luck with development!
(02-11-2022, 01:30 PM)Stratus_Hound Wrote: Well, it is pretty basic, but no major issues, pretty good for an introduction. Kudos for you for going for a little bit older character, I think they turn out to be more interesting than all the tweenies ace pilots we get. Well, I am nobody to talk, but people tend to go for some kind of visual formatting in their RP posts, and while it is not a neccessity it certainly adds a bit of flair to the post. Waiting for more point of view 1st person bits, they add to the character quite a bit. Also, looking forward to meeting Arin in-game, good luck with development!
Thanks for the feedback. Initially I just wanted an introduction. Something to make my character have a bit of background rather than just suddenly existing out of nowhere
I need to find some sort of "flair" / visual formatting to use as a lot of posts will be first person personal logs from here on.
