feedback on a story

[masternerdguy]

oops. some kind of error.

anyway, feedback on this would be nice http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=43419

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Send the fat kid in to see if its a trap

[Laowai]

So generally your guy is kinda crazy who likes to commit acts of terrorism and extortion because he is board?


Haha nice.... Story isnt bad:)

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[Crossbow]

nice story, and yes , i dont think there are any masterminds yet, however

i think a mastermind does not do the job himself , he should be smart enough to let others do it and get away clean when it goes wrong.

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[masternerdguy]

So generally your guy is kinda crazy who likes to commit acts of terrorism and extortion because he is board?
Haha nice.... Story isnt bad:)

yep:D

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Send the fat kid in to see if its a trap