I wont say Goodbye

[Jeremy Hunter]

This is not for Running from Nightfall, its for I won't say Goodbye. Do not give me feedback on Jeremy

Link to Story

So, im making the background for my Navy char, so please tell me how I'm doing so far.

Tips, suggestions, etc appreciated.

Criticism welcome.

Flaming, trolling, etc not welcome.

So yeah.

Have at it.

-Jeremy

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[VoluptaBox]

At first I thought it was another leaving thread...

As for the story itself, I hate giving feedback on that kind of stuff. Just do whatever the hell makes you happy. That's good roleplay 8-|

[Jeremy Hunter]

At first I thought it was another leaving thread...

As for the story itself, I hate giving feedback on that kind of stuff. Just do whatever the hell makes you happy. That's good roleplay 8-|

Heh, didnt think of that.

No prob.

I just want to know how my writing is and stuff.

Also any holes in the roleplay.

-Jeremy

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Jeremy Hunter]

Oops, forgot to bump.

Ba-da-bump. How,am I doin' with Alexis?

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.

[Jeremy Hunter]

And added more...read n review pl0x!

And it will get worse...

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May you ever walk in the Light, Shizune.