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[thisDerius]

Hello. As I have decided to return to Discovery, I have also decided to boot up my old characters and make a big, general update on pretty much everything.

You can check everything here:

The Stormclaw Journal

What Lies Beyond: John Derius Guerra (WIP)

John Derius Guerra: Man or Machine

Scarlet Marie Sharp: Freebird's Diary

The Hunters: A story of warriors and traitors

I was mainly expanding the stories and ran through some grammar checks.

As always, constructive criticizm is welcome.

You can always find me in space and I am always willing to RP.

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[thisDerius]

Bump! small edit. Link changed.

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[thisDerius]

We are still alive here. Feel free to check it out.

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[thisDerius]

BUMP!

List updated.

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[thisDerius]

A wild bump appeared.

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[thisDerius]

Bumperious rex. I have removed something and added The Blackguard info.

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[thisDerius]

Full update completed. Feel free to check it out.

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[Lolipop12]

Looks awesome overall, especially Man or Machine. The bbcode format is well made.

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[thisDerius]

Update: A new entry into my RP. Opened up an old story and decided to rewrite it a bit. Expanded and detailed. It takes place before I placed John Derius Guerra into active roleplay.
Edit: Updated the font on "The Hunters". Much more readable now.

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