Monumental Sig

[Korolia]

If it's still up, I'll run my skills on this one too.

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[Crusader4]

A little better now?

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[Mr.Fabulous]

A little better now?

Wow... I'm surprised.. the eye-coloring really DID do the trick in improving it. Now I can feel the soul of the characters to the fullest!:shok:

...But they just... don't... fit! ...Man! :wacko: *continues scratching head even though it's starting to get bald from it*

Maybe it's because the 2D-paint-job of the characters, despite being awesome in their own right already, don't fit with the EPIC AWESOME of the 3D-rendered backgrounds they are in. Could you fix that in any way, like make the chars look like *cough*Otlum's*cough? Maybe recreate them into 3D-like? I can expect it being a tall order, but in the name of EPICNESS you MUST get that holy grail!!!

Heheh... Why'd you make the liner teal? Also, I didn't mean it's roll be angled... it's yaw is the one needing the angle... To the right too, to bring out more of its' left-side (its front being its... front)... not bad at all, the roll-angle, though. But I'm not in favor of the teal. Don't forget about it's engine trails, too.

Hmmm... the shrine's size doesn't do it justice, nor it's lighting... Could you make it follow the Red Sun's lighting, with heavy shadowing on most of it (meaning it's mostly black)? Also make it bigger by thrice the size...

The Nomad Fighter's still unchanged... would like it to have the same attention as the Shrine's texturing. Would also like the engine trail to be a lot longer, like it's already traveled a great distance.

As for the Center-cut... hmmm... what's the purpose of that teal-nebula anyway? a guideline in case you forgot where the center-line is? Would like it to be gone when the sig's at its final stages, k?

finally, the fonts... Tha's cursive, not Old English... something like those super-fancy letters of GTA-San Andreas. The one with the many-lines...

Overall:

... I can already catch a small whiff of that "Wow" effect... just not smell it and feel it, let alone taste it yet... I can only be satisfied if I can EAT EET!!!:P

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[Oldum]

Changed the guy on both, added some background alike colors to the ships ..

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[Mr.Fabulous]

Changed the guy on both, added some background alike colors to the ships ..

I like the top one better, so I'm choosing it for alteration.

I gotta say the guy now fits fine... but his head's too big. Would like it downsized, please. :laugh:Oh yeah... is it ever possible to change the dude's eye-color to green, and the girl's to sky-blue?

The Nomad Fighter looks a bit... polygon-ish, and not smooth. I think you should use the background as the lighting source instead.

respective jump-gates for each side... interesting. It's only the lighting that makes them screwy, so use the same detail as the Nomad fighter.

The Luxury Liner isn't bad at all... Would like it with engine trails now. :)

Also, I think it's the backgrounds that make them look empty. Total blackness doesn't look epic. Throw in a Dresden-like background for Leonardo (not sure if it's Dresden that's with a starry-yellow system), and put in more of that purple-blue nebula with stars in it for Mila (but not too bright stars. More like small, blue, insignificant dots)

Overall, it's your chars that gives you an edge, dude. And also early object 3D-ness. Good job. The "wow" effect is still too small to notice, but it's coming. ;)

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Ohh c'mon ... sorry but I got tired of this ... this doesn't worth the time and the energy and to redo the sign every time, cause you come up with something new every time.

Really sorry, but it's just not worth it ... make up your mind and be exact, or I just don't know, but you change your mind every time and it got a bit annoying. This is not a "monumental sign" as you stated, but you being way too picky, and trying to change anything ...


So sorry again, I'm out of this.

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[Korolia]

So, is this still open for more takers. If you wish to answer.

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[Mr.Fabulous]

Ohh c'mon ... sorry but I got tired of this ... this doesn't worth the time and the energy and to redo the sign every time, cause you come up with something new every time.

Really sorry, but it's just not worth it ... make up your mind and be exact, or I just don't know, but you change your mind every time and it got a bit annoying. This is not a "monumental sign" as you stated, but you being way too picky, and trying to change anything ...
So sorry again, I'm out of this.

Big :(

Ouch man. that hurt... maybe cause it was straight to the point. :laugh:

Yeah, you could say I'm picky. Oh, and I think it IS monumental because of that fact :P So if you haven't the patience for it, then I guess you don't.

Alright, then. Since you've given up, give me your transfer char and I'll compensate your time with 20M credits (uped from 10M because I see My... pickiness... isn't worth your time :() Helga_Faustbeign will take care of the transfer.

Ahh... that's too bad... oh well

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