The effects and overall look of the image is very, very nice, I wouldn't mind knowing how you do that:P
As you say, it isn't finished but the only criticism I would aim at it that it seems to lack depth, the relationship between the ships and the rest of the scene isn't very clear. With some tinkering though this could be a very nice piece of work.
effects are good, but overall composition is very awkward. You need a better general idea even if your skills of the making are unquestionably very good.
' Wrote:orders most specific thing is the fact that they are a hidden organization of spies, that don't need large battleships, but small craft that are able hide behind an asteroid. remember vanilla ("BUT THIS IS NOT VANILLA!" , yeah yeah just like outcasts didn't cure themselves of cardi and just like the blood dragons didn't manage to take over kusari, so did the order remain a rather secret movement). well in vanilla they had 1 ( in words: ONE ) battleship and a decent amount of UNDERCOVER agents around sirius. an osiris parked at cali isn't exactly undercover.
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well. at least iRP, they are. in the sad disco reality, order has more capital ships than the rest of sirius combined, but that is another matter)
edit: btw i still think the sig is nice but - less caps, more small craft. and you can use MORE MODELS of small craft!! great, huh?;)
Looks like someone doesnt like caps, Hmm i recall Gamma being Cap spaz central of Sirius.:ylove:
' Wrote:Looks like someone doesnt like caps, Hmm i recall Gamma being Cap spaz central of Sirius.:ylove:
No, that would be Minor >.>
As for the sig, very nicely done, one comment i have is that the Nomad ships seem to be very 'fat' in the middle. If you could somehow make their main bodies smaller, i think they would look much more in proportion.
Also, there is no need to raeg about caps or whatever, this is just about the actual artwork.
Thanks everyone for useful comments, unfortunately i've been very busy last few days and will be until next weekend so I won't have much time to make any changes on it.
Until then Im still open to suggestions;)