It's pretty good so far, but I think it needs a little more depth in emotion. Don't be afraid to get too extreme, it'll add some colour to the story. I think a bigger emphasization on the effects of the synthetic marijuana, as well as an increase in intolerance towards it (especially to someone who's let it take over his life). Also, it'd be nice to get a better idea of his social/financial standings.
Ohai! Those were the easiest 20 million I've ever made:D
One problem I have is that I never know just how high my character should be...
Because having a conversation where Damerae is like "Hey... yeah... peace" is kinda weird. And when he is "Hey... I think you should unload those pilots... the Navy might get mad..." it seems a bit... un-high to me.
If anyone has tips on how a high person acts, that'd be great. Because I don't have any experience myself:D
' Wrote:If anyone has tips on how a high person acts, that'd be great. Because I don't have any experience myself:D
You act sometimes stupid and impulsive, depends on the sort that you smoked. Sometimes you just freeze and cannot concentrate your mind on something, you start laughing for nothing. Sometimes it works other way- you get depressive, ignorant and aggressive. Sometimes you get extremely hungry and eats everything in the kitchen. It is highly dependable what you smoke,how much of it you smoke, also your currnet mental state, different Pot bring different reactions on the surface in different situations, different people smoking the same Pot have also different experience.
Cool story btw, you can try to be drug dealer too it must be funny, slap pirate ID and force the people to buy your stuff, or if they buy it willingly even better.
(10-09-2013, 10:51 AM)Knjaz Wrote: Official faction players that are often accused of elitism, never deploy them and have those weird, immersion killing "fair fight/dueling" suicidal hobbies. (yes, i've seen enough of those lolduels, where house military with overwhelming force on the field willingly loses a pilot in a duel. ffs.)