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Peace, Happiness, And Lots Of Marijuana

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Peace, Happiness, And Lots Of Marijuana
Offline Toaster
06-17-2011, 04:58 PM,
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Damerae's Story


If you have any critique on the story or the character (Happy.Rainbow) then feel free to post here.

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Offline Marrone
06-18-2011, 02:27 AM,
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It's pretty good so far, but I think it needs a little more depth in emotion. Don't be afraid to get too extreme, it'll add some colour to the story. I think a bigger emphasization on the effects of the synthetic marijuana, as well as an increase in intolerance towards it (especially to someone who's let it take over his life). Also, it'd be nice to get a better idea of his social/financial standings.

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06-18-2011, 12:36 PM,
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Emotions
Background info
Drug tolerance


All noted, I'll try to get them in the story ASAP.

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Offline Marrone
06-19-2011, 02:47 AM,
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' Wrote:Drug tolerance

Drug intolerance

The more people look down on it, the better it'll be for your characters development.

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06-19-2011, 06:41 PM,
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I meant intolerance :unsure:


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Offline Aurigae
06-19-2011, 06:48 PM,
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Briefly met ya ingame. Pretty fun encounter. Keep it up.

Real detective, arentcha?

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Offline Toaster
06-19-2011, 07:03 PM,
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Ohai! Those were the easiest 20 million I've ever made:D

One problem I have is that I never know just how high my character should be...

Because having a conversation where Damerae is like "Hey... yeah... peace" is kinda weird. And when he is "Hey... I think you should unload those pilots... the Navy might get mad..." it seems a bit... un-high to me.

If anyone has tips on how a high person acts, that'd be great. Because I don't have any experience myself:D

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Offline Govedo13
06-20-2011, 12:44 PM, (This post was last modified: 06-20-2011, 12:47 PM by Govedo13.)
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' Wrote:If anyone has tips on how a high person acts, that'd be great. Because I don't have any experience myself:D
You act sometimes stupid and impulsive, depends on the sort that you smoked. Sometimes you just freeze and cannot concentrate your mind on something, you start laughing for nothing. Sometimes it works other way- you get depressive, ignorant and aggressive. Sometimes you get extremely hungry and eats everything in the kitchen. It is highly dependable what you smoke,how much of it you smoke, also your currnet mental state, different Pot bring different reactions on the surface in different situations, different people smoking the same Pot have also different experience.
Cool story btw, you can try to be drug dealer too it must be funny, slap pirate ID and force the people to buy your stuff, or if they buy it willingly even better.

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(10-09-2013, 10:51 AM)Knjaz Wrote: Official faction players that are often accused of elitism, never deploy them and have those weird, immersion killing "fair fight/dueling" suicidal hobbies. (yes, i've seen enough of those lolduels, where house military with overwhelming force on the field willingly loses a pilot in a duel. ffs.)

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Offline r3vange
06-20-2011, 01:03 PM,
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[color=#FFFFFF]Well I go through the certain phases

Not that much high -> Chill the **** out and and be in serenity with myself

Averagely hight -> I start talking really complicated philosophical thoughts that make no sense whatsoever

Moderately high -> I usually just go in silent mode not being able to stand and all

Very high -> there are times when get paranoid for no reason/ talk complete bollocks

Absolutely thrashed -> fall asleep

It's weird to explain you know, you can't actually "say" what it feels like and from what I know it varies slightly from person to person

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