Jack Denton's research log feedback

[Zeppy]

Just posted the first post in a new story.

Tell me what you think, especially the explanation of how the machine works. I had some downright horrible writer's block and it took me ages to get that part done, I'm not entirely sure that what I ended up with is very clear.

An Unsheduled Vacation of Sorts

EDIT: also if anyone can't see any quotation marks, please PM me or something. I think I fixed it but it would appear that copying from Word to the forums is an inperfect science :/

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Reseach into the Kansas sector

Research into the Privas Planetary Cluster

Research into Alien "Trade Lanes"

A new ship, Jack Denton's time on Freeport 11

The JHC Drive

An Unscheduled Vacation of Sorts

The above are meant to be read in order, if you jump in at "A new ship" you are going to be lost.

RP feedback thread

[Zeppy]

An Unscheduled Vacation of Sorts

Just posted another, uh... post.

Let me know what you think.

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Reseach into the Kansas sector

Research into the Privas Planetary Cluster

Research into Alien "Trade Lanes"

A new ship, Jack Denton's time on Freeport 11

The JHC Drive

An Unscheduled Vacation of Sorts

The above are meant to be read in order, if you jump in at "A new ship" you are going to be lost.

RP feedback thread