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mwerte · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 01:01 AM by mwerte.)

see below

mwerte · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 01:49 AM by mwerte.)

Font choices!

[Image: Cadmus1.png]

03-24-2010, 02:08 AM,

I've been looking over the film... There are no better shots.

Top clipped, bitch to cut out:
http://s56.photobucket.com/albums/g195/Blu...nt=Capture3.png

****ty-ass motion blur:
http://s56.photobucket.com/albums/g195/Blu...nt=Capture2.png

Motion blur and crappy angle:
http://s56.photobucket.com/albums/g195/Blu...ent=Capture.png

The shot that you already have happens to be the best one there is. Since that's when we got the first glimpse of the reaverized Serenity, it's the only time the camera held still at a decent angle.

Cadmus · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 03:03 AM by Cadmus.)

Bah, thanks all the same, Blue Shift.
If you'd like some money for that, even though it's not useful, PM me with the name of one of your ships.

Mwerte: Pure bodaciousness!
I'm personally a big fan of the last one there, with the squashed (or is it squished?) font. Any chance you could put the name "Cadmus" in smaller letters below, next to my picture there? Some italic or hand script would probably work best for that. Also, could you try adding "The" to "Dragonfly" and see if it looks good?

You're currently the best in running, but I'd like to wait a bit to see if Waratah makes anything, or give the others a chance to buff theirs up if they feel like it.

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mwerte · 03-24-2010, 03:37 AM,

boink! Not sure how the gradient on the dark shirt turned out. I like the script font though, but that's just me.

Cadmus · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 03:44 AM by Cadmus.)

Try moving it right, off the picture and into the blank.
It might need to be made a tad smaller.

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mwerte · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 03:57 AM by mwerte.)

there, better?

Cadmus · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 04:36 AM by Cadmus.)

The gradient is a just a bit too severe.

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mwerte · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 05:20 AM by mwerte.)

I'm not sure I understand, should there be more white, or should the black not be as black, or...

Try this one on for size:

[Image: Cadmus4d.png]

Cadmus · (This post was last modified: 03-24-2010, 05:47 AM by Cadmus.)

Yes... the black was a bit too black and the white a bit too white.
Try to equally balance it a bit in the greys. Make the overall shift less dramatic.

Also, I preferred the font from this one:
[Image: Cadmus4c.png]

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