character render is good. The Venica Serone text however, is barely visible. As to the gunship, the lighting used is not fitting to background, way too reflective of light. Should be darker. I dislike the effect on Venezi Syndicate too, too pale, not strong enough. Rest is correct.
Gunboat is better. I'm not sure if you can enhance the contrast, might be better. For Venezi text, I'll suggest a gradient instead of a single tone of color. Venica is still very pale, but already better... I'd think about adding some sort of light within the text itself instead of enhancing the contour.
Gallia signature is nice. Has a cloudy feel to it. I like the lines around the GRN text, but it feels a bit pixelated when you look closer. The engine exhaust effect is... too bland? It has only a single color tone. Needs more, and perhaps, a stronger shape. I'm not sure if you have an appropriate abstract brush to give the impression of engine thrust, it would look probably better.
Note: It's Korolia. Think, Toyota Corolla, you know.
Gallia signature is pretty much perfect as it is now. Nothing much that I'd change of it, and the exhaust is perfect.
Venica, well... something just bugs me off, but idk what. Theres the gunboat exhaust, of course, but a general impression the colors doesn't blend together quite well...
Akuma sig, composition is well done, but quite simple. Nothing fancy there, a unique reddish tone of color - note that we can still see a green tint to the helm of the character eyes.
' Wrote:Gallia signature is pretty much perfect as it is now. Nothing much that I'd change of it, and the exhaust is perfect.
Venica, well... something just bugs me off, but idk what. Theres the gunboat exhaust, of course, but a general impression the colors doesn't blend together quite well...
Akuma sig, composition is well done, but quite simple. Nothing fancy there, a unique reddish tone of color - note that we can still see a green tint to the helm of the character eyes.
Venica, right, will work on the Engine exhaust thingy.. But im quite satisfied with how it is now:P
The Akuma.. Well, Not sure what to add, it's a pretty straight forward signature, the thing that should be the sig is the ship and scene itself..