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Dear Sirs and Madams,
the IMG thinks it would be best if Kruger| submitted a draft of §3 , §4 and §5, as their side knows best what their aim is. Putting the two versions next to each other might help in finding a compromise or at least realizing where the problems are and how to fix them.
[color=#FFCCCC]OLD VERSION 1:
§6: Reaffirmation of the Treaty
§6.1: Periodical Reaffirmation: The treaty needs to be reaffirmed by all signing parties every year by the end of January.
§6.2: Adaption to Change of Mining Locations: Reaffirmation of the treaty by all signing parties becomes necessary if the mining locations change and the zones defined in §1 are not valid any more.
[color=#66FF99]UPDATED VERSION 2:
§6: Reaffirmation of the Treaty
§6.1: Periodical Reaffirmation: The treaty needs to be reaffirmed by all signing parties every three months, starting by the end of January.
§6.2: Adaption to Change of Mining Locations: Reaffirmation of the treaty by all signing parties becomes necessary if the mining locations change and the zones defined in §1 are not valid any more.
Also the Kruger| change to the "escort them out" part has been included in the original document:
[color=#FF6666]OLD VERSION 1:
b) provided a devoted escort to the nearest holding** of their employers (as defined in §5)
Has been changed to:
VERSION 2:
b) provided a devoted escort out of the respective faction's property.
The IMG| also worded article 7 that includes the cancellation as requested by Kruger. The IMG can agree to not include the proposed fines.
[color=#33FF33]NEW ARTICLE:
§7: Cancelling the Treaty
§7.1: The treaty can be cancelled by any signing party by a written statement to all signing parties. The notification must name the reason for the withdrawal.
§7.2: After the cancellation, the treaty remains in effect for another 14 days before it is terminated.
The IMG encourages Kruger| to word the articles that are being hotly discussed at the moment and to submit them.
Yours sincerely,
Veronica Ryan
Spokesperson of the IMG
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