Under diplomacy, add Gallic Lawful Forces and Gallic Corporations as hostile.
You need to add some section where you lay out what your members will be actually doing in game. Just shipping terraforming supplies from your bases to sites that need to be terraformed? What else? By reading your write-up it's not obvious what the members do.
Add a section for Bases Owned and name 1 as your HQ.
Will Planetform have its own escorts, hire others for that, or fly un-escorted? Note it on your write-up.
