Planetform Incorporated

[SparkyRailgun]

My suggestions for your write-up:

• Under diplomacy, add Gallic Lawful Forces and Gallic Corporations as hostile.
  
• You need to add some section where you lay out what your members will be actually doing in game. Just shipping terraforming supplies from your bases to sites that need to be terraformed? What else? By reading your write-up it's not obvious what the members do.
  
• Add a section for Bases Owned and name 1 as your HQ.
  
• Will Planetform have its own escorts, hire others for that, or fly un-escorted? Note it on your write-up.
  
• Add a listing of the systems in your ZOI
  

Thanks for your suggestions!
I'll get around to using most of them later today, but in reply to your first point;

As noted, the Diplomacy is how we view others. Yes, they have trampled on our projects and stolen our station, but that doesn't mean we're going to start shooting at them. Look at it like the IMG; they know they'd get crushed if they attempted anything silly.

In the end, obviously we don't like them too much, but we would be willing to make money from them if the Bretonian Government never found out. That's difficult and unlikely to happen, but the possibility remains.

Planetform's main reason for existing is to adapt planets for human life... That skill of adaptation continues in the corporate level by taking things as they come, even if our beautiful station is conquered by the cheese-eating surrender monkeys.:P

The hostile section is for entities we openly fire at if provoked.


Thanks again!

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