New Liberty Carrier Model

[massdriver]

Massdriver, your current model loks like a "LN dread meets Jorm"....

Nice liberty kinda front, but then it gets way too fat and wide for the rest. Try make the middle section sleaker, and extend the front part a tiny bit, give it some length. After all if we are to stay true to the LN Tradition, which hails from Vanilla, their caps should be long and sleak, yet compact, with a razor sharp blade-like nose.

Your current submission does not fit that bill, thus it does not feel right, for a liberty ship. Its simply just too compact.

The other model should be a good template for you. It is more liberty, and less "random". However in my opinion, the other model posted here is too long. See if you can come up with a compromise. That would make more sense, and fit the bill nicely.

"Try make"
no remakes, it's final.

"if we are to stay true to the LN Tradition"
me not, as a lot of virtual time have passed since vanilla times or you prefer to see same for hundred years?

"Your current submission does not fit that bill"
doesnt fit your criteria of Liberty ship, not mine or others.

"The other model should be a good template for you"
1 picture is too few for me to study the model.

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