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[Melanie Tyler]

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Commander Jane Hartman, [Liberty Navy]

Formerly Private First Class Jane Hartman of the Liberty Marine Corps, Jane is the sort of person who lives (and fully expects to die) in her uniform. That moment very nearly came when a smuggler detonated incendiaries on-board a transport her team was inspecting. Hartman suffered significant burns to most of her face and, though surgery has reduced the scars to a few facial marks, it was enough to force her resignation from the Corps.

Unquestioning of her orders and unflinching in their execution, Hartman's dedication to the Liberty Navy extends almost to the point of fanaticism. However; her true loyalties lie first with the men and women she serves with and with the organisation that created them second.

• Missing In Action
  Group RP: Drifting in the Detroit Debris Field.
  
• Human Factors
  Not all issues in the Navy are matters of weapons and ammunition. Conversation between Lieutenant Pete Levine (//SeaFalcon) and Jane Hartman. It also marks the beginning of her time aboard Normandie.

Commander Melanie Tyler, [Liberty Navy Secondary Fleet]

Young and flippant for a Commander, Tyler was originally an atmospheric pilot attached to the Liberty Air Force on Planet Houston. Operating under the callsign 'Harpy,' (earnt for the revenge she inflicted upon another Officer candidate for a less-than-ideal break-up) Melanie enlisted purely for the 'free' flight training, intending to do her time and leave for the civilian world.

That changed with the mobilization of the Air Force to assist the Bretonian Forces in Leeds. A Junior Officer sent with the task force, like so many others, Tyler was forced into command when an attack on the Chief of the Air Force's transport vanished, along with most of senior command. In the days that followed, Tyler played a key role in re-establishing the Air Force's relationship with Bretonian forces, although the task force was too far gone to re-assemble. Task Force Sierra of the Liberty Air Force's Space Division was dissolved in early 819A.S, and Tyler returned to Liberty. Like many other Officers, she chose to accept a transfer package to the Navy rather then return to surface duty, and was appointed the Commanding Officer of the Battlecruiser Furious in recognition of her role in Bretonia. She views the failure of the Air Force in Bretonia as her fault, and plans to return there to rejoin the fight against the Gallics.

• LAF|Inaugral Dining-In Night
  Group RP: A grounded Melanie Tyler is tasked with setting up the organisation's first ceremonial dinner.
  
• Treason
  Surely it can't be that bad?
  
• Christy's
  Melanie and Thomas Page discuss the Air Force in Bretonia. May/May not feature a minor emotional breakdown. (//This one's a little older, so the formatting's a bit off.)
  
• Unfaltering (Ship's Logs: LNS-Furious)
  Furious' official entry in the Liberty Navy Database, and a collection of short one-post stories about the ship and its crew. It's the most frequently updated thread I've got, though discussing the speed of my updates is sort of like comparing the speed of glaciers.
  
• Time Capsule (Melanie Tyler's Logs)
  Tyler's diary. Infrequently updated when the mood strikes her.
  
• Letters from the Homefront
  Ongoing communications between Melanie Tyler and Thomas Page, ranging from conspiracy theories, to university, to puns bad enough to cause psychosis.

Other

Miscellaneous other tales.

• Project: Charon
  Group RP: When morality is weighed against human lives, can the ends justify the means? (Siren's origins, written with the assistance of Chrono for one of his characters.)

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