Morph Logs of Abiyamuta

[Nosferath]

Okay, I could finally find some time to review your logs. In general, it's quite good. But there are some details here and there that need to be fixed:

* NEVER write "u" instead of "you", or use any other kind of "internet shortening" or acronym.
* You are using ( ) both for feelings (which is good, and is done that way by most of us), but also for other words here and there. Try to stick to the former. PS: Reading through more logs, it seems you have fixed that by yourself, good.
* Try not to use human-given names of us, like "Nomads" or "Morph". Use "Light-being", "Light-brethren", "Youngling", etc.
* You tend to merge certain words together, like "thisone". Sometimes it's hard for reading, so try to capitalize the words, or separate with a hyphen.

That's it for now. I'm looking forward to see more logs, and visions.

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