' Wrote:...
The [SLA] is a Anarcho-Communist Terrorist group, Determined to bring down the House Governments, through revolution be it peaceful of violent, They will not fight alone tho, Their goal is to unite the people of Sirius under one cause and flag.
... strikes raids on the oppressive house governments and their greedy corporations through out Sirius!
... be brutally honest please.
Sirius-wide terrorism? That doesn't really resemble the Xenos activities. Not to mention that: broad area + unchecked terrorist activities = frowned upon by everyone around here.
First tip: Pick a stricter Zone of Interest and act there.
Second tip: Jump start from the original agenda of the NPC faction you're using (As far as I'm concerned, Xenos aren't worried about peoples other than the Libertonians, but I'm sure the guys from the Xeno Alliance can tell you about them much better than myself). If that faction doesn't make sense with the agenda you're attempting to portray, then perhaps you should choose another or go generic (paramilitary ID).
Third tip: There's wisdom there, take a careful look at it.