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[Capt. Henry Morgan]

It has been awesome so far, but the last post is a bit cringey. Would make for a Hollywood movie, but those are not known for their quality. If the king has to die (guess you're aiming at a civil war or at the abolition of the Monarchy in the Council's favour), I'd prefer if he died of old age, or an illness, or got ill and was killed by a revolutionary surgeon on the operating table, or poisoned by an impatient heir. If you want to feel that it was Bretonia's accomplishment, the jungles of Gaia are good places for snipers. Especially if the king is as proud and confident as a certain Austrian duke. That one was almost as proud and confident as literally every Frenchman.

The more I think about it, the more I agree with your overall point here. I still want the King to be taken down by a planetary-scale event of dubious morality, but the one I picked has plot holes big enough to fly a Valor through sideways. I'll be rewriting that post at some point in the near future.

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