' Wrote:.......The story itself has no sense of proportion.......his powers are illogical and frequently inconsistent.....
i'm not sure what you mean by no sense of proportion.
i'm unaware of any illogical and inconsistant powers. in my head everything is worked out logically and as scientifically as possible within the limitations of freelancer science. please point these out so i can correct the mistakes. my guess is that i failed to explain it fully as it happened.