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I mostly like it, but there are three main points I'd like to raise:
1) The colours are a bit off - try using the Skins for the Dunkirks with the duller reds and golds.
2) The prow is smooth, whereas the Dunkirk has ridges along the prow. Adding ridges (skin or model) would make it look alot better and fit in with the current Capital line (I think all of the current capitals have the ridges)
3) Again the skin, the Dunkirk has a bridge section, which is a texture made of windows painted accross the far front of the prow. Maybe you could incorporate such a bridge area on this model too? It would help get an idea of scale too.
EDIT: Currently it looks like one of the Alliance caps out of Starlancer because of the colours...