My freelancer (transport) currently does a handful of the runs you listed, and is based out of Freeport 9... interaction with OSI could be some good RP, that is, once I get his story completed.
Some input:
1) Rep:
Don't forget to include the Phantoms as hostile. There's no escaping it.
2) Picky grammar:
In the sentence, "Will be denoted by X in there name in the roster," there should be their.
3) Is there a reason that only senior escort pilots can use bombers?
4) Are your transports only allowed to do the listed routes? Maybe you should have a generic allowed cargo list that includes things such as water and food rations to carry while traveling from base to base.
Example:
Cardiff to The Ring – Beryllium
I carry passengers from New Berlin to Planet Nuremburg then Engine Components to Freeport 9.
(I get stuck at Ignostadt)
Anyway, I just noticed that the next class is coming in. *poof*