I like how each entry is self-enclosed, like snapshots of each person. They actually FEEL like seperate people, whereas in other stories, the characters tend to blur together with only the names changing. Im glad to see you doing something with the Gaians; usually when I run across one everything feels so...one-dimensional, so stereotypical, so Captain Planet. I like the darker edge, the discomforting fanaticism. Look forward to reading more.