So, I finally did what all the Crimebosses before me couldn't be bothered doing: Updated the Faction Information.
I'm mostly looking for critique on the faction write up itself. Spelling/grammar mistakes, colour critiques, layout/formatting, missing or incorrect diplomacy or whatever else you think is missing or needs to be changed.
But of course, feedback on the faction itself is welcomed. Please post that in this thread now instead of the old one.