(07-31-2019, 03:42 PM)Corpus13 Wrote: Looks like downgraded version of Forlorn Hope.
First of all, I think, you would like to change the font and size of text in your ID section, Orbitron with xx-large looks really ugly. Also you would probably like to check your info for typos:
- Cannot Allie with any gallic lawful
Poor Allie she can not with any gallic lawful.
I haven't had any encounter with TSS in game yet, but using BHG IFF in combination with Freelancer ID is already strange looking for me. Your actions and diplomacy is also a weird thing - you try to play greedy mercs, striving for influence and money, but at the same time you deem gallic lawfuls to be shot on sight. I might be blind, but there is no single line in your information or any RP thread, explaining why you don't like Gallic lawfuls that much.
In general, your faction seems to be kind of raw and poorly thought for me. I don't want to say, that it's absolutely true, but that's an impression TSS gave me. Maybe you should wait for a bit more and decide more clearly what do you want.
Nevertheless, good luck.
Thanks for wishing us good luck. Some esthetic and grammar mistakes will be fixed in the future no worries. <3
The BHG IFF is necessary since its required for a hunter to be red to the target before he can kill it and claim the kill. I would personally prefer the Freelancer ID but Freelancers are very... Neutral aka. White to everything. The faction is meant to be very simple and so are the factions goals. <3
Next feedback.
We did numerous antigalic missions. Which doesn't mean we don't kill other stuff as well. As pointed out to you... We do we have a job center which I personally spent numerous hours creating and thinking how to make it understandable. And I must say... It came out quite well. I'm rather proud of it. I personally find it silly that a faction with its headquarters in Coronado would actually assist gallic navy and make enemies with their neighbours who would just delete us from existence. <3
We realise the Micro civilisation thingy is extremely extremely far fached and we realise its nearly impossible to accomplish. Its just a goal that we thought would be fun to have it in the mindset of a mercenary IRP. We know it's not original but we're trying to be as independent as a freelancer faction can be. <3
The money did actually come to the bank from my personal account but that doesn't mean we haven't made more then 1 billion in the last few events. Really, there was aland and then there was us destroying transports and getting some nice money of it so... Two very profitable jobs infact. And as I said in that thread. Some might considere it patriotism and some might consider it something else. But we consider it an investment. A mercenary would perhaps consider it a legal bribe. <3
Keep on posting feedback. I love reading and reacting to your feedback. It's fun. ^^ <3