(05-05-2017, 11:30 PM)NieRdackel Wrote: A Bounty Hunter base in Kyushu, amusing. Still I dislike seeing such claims out of thin air. Back it up with a story and I might be satisfied.
Once upon a time, a group of Bounty Hunters ninja'd their way into Kyushu amid the civil war, establishing a beachhead, or at least a Large Space Station/Outpost with which to conquer Kusari for their lord and master John Marhsall. effectively hunt Outcasts along a key cardamine route, whereupon they took to interdicting cardi convoys, which started putting a dent in profits. The GC was clearly working at the behest of the Outcasts to preserve the Orange Dream. It makes perfect sense.
EDIT: Ninja'd. Where do I submit an app, though?
For the group? I made no app atm. But will do soon. Add me on skype if you want to. Same name as the forum one P
And as avalable to anyone interested.PM me on forums and gimme your skype.
(05-05-2017, 11:30 PM)NieRdackel Wrote: A Bounty Hunter base in Kyushu, amusing. Still I dislike seeing such claims out of thin air. Back it up with a story and I might be satisfied.
Once upon a time, a group of Bounty Hunters ninja'd their way into Kyushu amid the civil war, establishing a beachhead, or at least a Large Space Station/Outpost with which to conquer Kusari for their lord and master John Marhsall. effectively hunt Outcasts along a key cardamine route, whereupon they took to interdicting cardi convoys, which started putting a dent in profits. The GC was clearly working at the behest of the Outcasts to preserve the Orange Dream. It makes perfect sense.
EDIT: Ninja'd. Where do I submit an app, though?
For the group? I made no app atm. But will do soon. Add me on skype if you want to. Same name as the forum one P
And as avalable to anyone interested in joining.PM me on forums and gimme your skype.
I can't help but notice the iffy part about Islay and Gaians in there. It's a pretty bold claim that holds no ground, to say the least. I'd really like you to replace that part with something else.
Well, I want to say what I am thinking about your fraction too. First of all, story is a pretty... Doubtful, as for me. Yes, I'm talking about the moment connected with Gaians. And it looks pretty strange for me too:
Quote:They modified the IFF and transponder of ships, so they look like Rheinland or Navy shipwrecks
Did you fly on military ships belonging to Liberty and Rheinland? But I thought, that you are part of BHG. Yes, you can change the IFF and transponder of this ships, but you can't change a hull and othet stuff, like that, I think so.
On which ships can you fly? What is ID? IFF? Allies? Enemies? Do you have any ranks? Why did you strart the war with Gaians? Your information thread looks pretty poor. (And codes are horrible, if to be honest.)
Removing
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will be a good thing, as for me. Remove grey backgroung from your logo. As for me, it would be nice of you too, if you will change color palette. And don't use so many Italic please. It hurts my eyes. To sum up, it is just my humble opinion and nothing more. Keep it up, anyway.
(05-07-2017, 12:14 PM)Otto.Muller Wrote: Well, I want to say what I am thinking about your fraction too. First of all, story is a pretty... Doubtful, as for me. Yes, I'm talking about the moment connected with Gaians. And it looks pretty strange for me too:
Quote:They modified the IFF and transponder of ships, so they look like Rheinland or Navy shipwrecks
Did you fly on military ships belonging to Liberty and Rheinland? But I thought, that you are part of BHG. Yes, you can change the IFF and transponder of this ships, but you can't change a hull and othet stuff, like that, I think so.
On which ships can you fly? What is ID? IFF? Allies? Enemies? Do you have any ranks? Why did you strart the war with Gaians? Your information thread looks pretty poor. (And codes are horrible, if to be honest.)
Removing
Quote:
will be a good thing, as for me. Remove grey backgroung from your logo. As for me, it would be nice of you too, if you will change color palette. And don't use so many Italic please. It hurts my eyes. To sum up, it is just my humble opinion and nothing more. Keep it up, anyway.
At aa time most trusted MD members could fly Liberty and rheinland ships. And they still can be. And I said that only a few of the shipwrecks might have been part of MD. Sorry fir the inconvenience. I am doing my best to build this to be aceptable by everybody. Sad thing is I cant include different organizations as leaders get anoyed. (No offense.)
Well, it is simple. If you want lore with other factions, don't make that lore up but RP that lore. The Islay thing isn't a minor thing, same with Kyushu. Give your faction a neutral background lore and add more lore over time when you can back it up by roleplay.
(05-07-2017, 12:47 PM)Sombra Hookier Wrote: Well, it is simple. If you want lore with other factions, don't make that lore up but RP that lore. The Islay thing isn't a minor thing, same with Kyushu. Give your faction a neutral background lore and add more lore over time when you can back it up by roleplay.
I am working on it. Currently replacing the part with the Gaian part with an exploration in Drake. If that is not okay then I dont know what else to put. As I am trying not to include official factions. only NPCs