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[schlurbi]

I luv 'em.

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"Who is it doing this synthetic type of alpha beta psychedelic funkin'?"

[Montezuma/Kukulcan]

In regards to your ZoI map, piracy in Alaska, Ellesmere, Illinios and Virginia?

Are you serious? Alaska and Ellesmere are supposed to be top secret, and the other two are very heavily guarded, plus, what would the RP justification be for pirating in the LN/LPI/LSF guard systems? Is there really anything to gain from it?


Other than that, nothing at all wrong that i have noticed, keep up the good work amigos.

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[Elven]

+1.

You can include Manchster to your ZOI maybe?
And exclude Alaska and Ellesmere, of course.

[Colonel.Tigh]

i can only tell from two little piratings on me, but they were among the most enjoable onse, good play and fais as well.

keep on, but only chickens pirate in local:Pwhat are you afraid of??

[obnoxious1]

Role play from this group is OUTSTANDING!
Enjoyed ever encounter so far with them & they are trying very hard to keep the RP vivid & correct.
May need some tweaks in ZOI, nothing major, Hope they go official, would be a great addition to the community.

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[atlantis2112]

Wooh Black Betty bam balam!

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I dont like the lulwutting,
The excessive use of Falcatas because all you care about is PVP.
U haz ur own Bomber so stick to it.

Whats with that Spyglass of yours? He a lulwut or something because he just roams about LULPEWing stuff.

Please sort it out.

We've not a Falcata among our ranks. We 'haz' a broadsword and our members 'haz' broadswords.

And Roaming around? I take the thing out... every two weeks for a run around in Magellan? The last time it was within 50K of the NY jumphole was when I was returning to Magellan and a LABC and a bomber decide to gank a Sabre. I crised overthere, had a nice chat with a friendly Rogue Cruiser Captain, then returned home.

Also, I doubt lolwuts get kudosed, as well as PMed good fight by members of both sides of the fights afterwords.

If you would like to prove your Falcata point, I welcome you to post a dated screenshot with these so called "excessive" amounts of Falcatas.

Cheers.

keep on, but only chickens pirate in local tongue.gif what are you afraid of??

Pirates?! /summon LABC Keill! Keill it with fire!:P

That's what were afraid of:D
Define lolwut please.

Are you serious? Alaska and Ellesmere are supposed to be top secret, and the other two are very heavily guarded, plus, what would the RP justification be for pirating in the LN/LPI/LSF guard systems? Is there really anything to gain from it?

This was an oversight by Xareck. Understandable, big fluffly floaty brushes are fun to use and you can get carried away with it.:PI've never actually set foot in Ellesmere myself with any character, and I don't think a VR has ever been in Alaska. If you see one though.. let me know. I'll lay the smack to them. Expect the changes to the ZoI map as soon as I can get a hold of Xareck.

[abbamouse]

Your RP is OK, but it seems incomplete. "Sell Cardi to Manhattan" seems like a pretty uninteresting (and almost nonsensical) goal for a faction. Surely that is a means to some other end -- making money, spreading addiction, some strange thing to do with Nomads, sticking it to "the man," etc. Why the fetish for this particular commodity? If you know the characters' underlying motivations for their behavior, I suspect you will find even more RP opportunities.

For example, you sound a bit like a street gang of sorts (like many pirate factions). How do you intend to seize some "turf" for your group? The Lane Hacker connection is strained -- would they really like this group operating from their bases? Do you represent competition with other local gangs? There are more RP opportunities here as well.

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I go by abbamouse, but my characters are the Cryer researcher Daniel Moss, the very boring and ordinary trader John Smith, the borderline-insane civilian Mr Joker, and a Bundschuh activist who goes by the alias Rosa Luxemburg. I am not them and they are not me.

[Xareck]

Your RP is OK, but it seems incomplete. "Sell Cardi to Manhattan" seems like a pretty uninteresting (and almost nonsensical) goal for a faction. Surely that is a means to some other end -- making money, spreading addiction, some strange thing to do with Nomads, sticking it to "the man," etc. Why the fetish for this particular commodity? If you know the characters' underlying motivations for their behavior, I suspect you will find even more RP opportunities.

For example, you sound a bit like a street gang of sorts (like many pirate factions). How do you intend to seize some "turf" for your group? The Lane Hacker connection is strained -- would they really like this group operating from their bases? Do you represent competition with other local gangs? There are more RP opportunities here as well.

We view Liberty military and a few of their politicians corrupt, one of them being the father of our Taskmasters.

And yes, one of our larger goals is to bring Cardamine into Liberty, as nearly all of our characters have the cardamine element tied in with their stories quite deeply. For example; John has a few mental issues with the Phantoms, and to deal with that, he uses absurd amounts of Cardamine. Whenever the Novak twins are away from one another from extended periods of time, they tend to relieve stress by using cardamine. Eh?

Also, I believe our Lane Hacker ties aren't all too strained, we were offered to join them at one point if I remember correctly.

I see your point about lack of goals, and we are currently working on developing some RP that will hopefully progress more personal goals, rather then goals that mutually help other people.

Wooh Black Betty bam balam!

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I dont like the lulwutting,
The excessive use of Falcatas because all you care about is PVP.
U haz ur own Bomber so stick to it.

Whats with that Spyglass of yours? He a lulwut or something because he just roams about LULPEWing stuff.

Please sort it out.

1. Lolwutting?
2. Falcatas?
3. Haz?
4. LULPEWing?

Either you didn't even take the time to read and see what faction you're criticizing, you've confused us with some other faction, or you're just lying for some unknown reason.

1.We don't allow "lolwutters" within our ranks, as evident when we grounded George Lopez for loling off in California.
2. None of the VR fly Falcatas. So where you get that, I don't know. Also, all we care about is PVP? THAT must be why we have weekly diplomatic events with several different factions! Ah, I get it now! </sarcasm>
3. What?
4. Just, no. Dream may be on the Spyglass once every know and then, but when he does, it's rare that he leaves our systems of operation. Again, where you got that statement, I don't know.

Please rethink your response.

@The ZoI Map: That was an error on my part, I wasn't paying attention when I pentooled around those systems. I'll make a new Map and have it fixed shortly.

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[Weepig]

Myself and the rest of OSI has only had a few interactions with you so far but I've been very impressed with your RP and general attitude towards the game.
During our main interaction to date, you guys brought a lot of ships and from a 10 minute meeting i got a real sense of what was what for everyone that turned up, so kudos for that.
I also applaud your behind the scenes attitude to RP and willingness to compromise so any and everyone that RPs with VR can have some fun, certainly in my experience.
I look forward to more interaction between OSI and the VR and hope you include as many other factions as you can in your RP.

I think the questions raised about your ZOI have merit. Any non-friendly/allied guard systems should be off limits, at least until you establish yourselves a bit.

All in all, i think you guys would be a great addition to the server so thumbs up from me.

P.S. Id happily take a swing at proof reading your back story, I'm a professional grammar-Nazi so say the word:)

[atlantis2112]

Updated ZoI Map.

Thanks everyone for your feedback so far, please keep it coming! We want more constructive criticism!