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[Alex.]

It took a while to get the Geb into position to take that picture, remember Schlurbi?:P(Yeah, I hate Nomad NPCs).

Apart from that, I like what your doing! Keep it up!

[Kuze]

I like it...its cool. If you are using PS, you can try these custom shapes:

http://graphicssoft.about.com/od/photoshop...s/shapes1_9.htm

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[Mr.Sanguinetti]

Beautiful in its every meaning. Swallowed a drop of tear. I'll mark this one into my 'why Liberty needs a revolution' dossier. Best wishes!

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[schlurbi]

Thanks again for all those positive replies. Today I have added two strips, because I wont be here for the next three days.

Thanks for reading as well.

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"Who is it doing this synthetic type of alpha beta psychedelic funkin'?"

[schlurbi]

Sorry for the Photobucket Problem right now, the story will be back up on Thursday for those who havent read it yet.

The next Part(s) should be out then as well.

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"Who is it doing this synthetic type of alpha beta psychedelic funkin'?"

[pchwang]

I assume you mean next Thursday?

Damn, and I just finished building this Time Machine. I guess I'll go kill time and go shoot some Morlocks or something.

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[7:42:05 PM][6:51:36 PM] Igor (Smokey): btw terry
[6:51:48 PM] Terrance Cooper: Ye?
[6:52:00 PM] Igor (Smokey): nothin
[6:52:03 PM] Igor (Smokey): just sayin btw
[6:52:05 PM] Terrance Cooper: <_<

Johnny_Haas: you shot anti criuse speed rockets!!!
Johnny_Haas: but why????
Johnny_Haas: ??
Johnny_Haas: why you shoot criuse speed rockets?

[schlurbi]

Actually I meant Tuesday. Anyway, Story and Signature are up again.

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"Who is it doing this synthetic type of alpha beta psychedelic funkin'?"

[Akura]

Do want more...


This story is awesome, so easy to read!

[pchwang]

Just one question:

Why do you keep using "teached?"

Everything else is grammatically correct as far as I could tell... But, as the great Dubya once said, "There's an old saying in Tennessee I know it's in Texas, probably in Tennessee that says, fool me once, shame on - shame on you. Fool me You can't get fooled again."

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[7:42:05 PM][6:51:36 PM] Igor (Smokey): btw terry
[6:51:48 PM] Terrance Cooper: Ye?
[6:52:00 PM] Igor (Smokey): nothin
[6:52:03 PM] Igor (Smokey): just sayin btw
[6:52:05 PM] Terrance Cooper: <_<

Johnny_Haas: you shot anti criuse speed rockets!!!
Johnny_Haas: but why????
Johnny_Haas: ??
Johnny_Haas: why you shoot criuse speed rockets?

[schlurbi]

Added two pages without the word Teached:P

The Panels on Page 13 are a bit meh.

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"Who is it doing this synthetic type of alpha beta psychedelic funkin'?"