My first try..

[Othman]

Here is a last update, had to do some additional brush strokes to enhance the integration of the layers.

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On the uncharted lagoons of anguish, I sail with a canoe made of my sins.

[mrgrey]

Kress: that angle-shade female in the background. Perfect choice perfect transparency.

only one prob: maybe the fire-hell coloured sun is not too angelic It feels a little- dark-angel stuff... tried in blue or golden? I think it would be a lot more ..angelic...
Otherwise its a great Pic n sig. *claps*

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[Othman]

Well yeah, since the background wasn't done by me, I haven't figured out how to change the planet's effect there yet. On the other hand, I tried applying a different setting this time.

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[nephandus]

That angel girl was better as a shadow. like on the 1st one. Otherwise grtz

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[Othman]

One last edit, I think I'm done with this. The first one well, if there is any chance to alter the planet there I might have a look at it. I'm just tired now though.

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On the uncharted lagoons of anguish, I sail with a canoe made of my sins.

[Revan]

One last edit, I think I'm done with this. The first one well, if there is any chance to alter the planet there I might have a look at it. I'm just tired now though.

Nice job!

I think if you work in some linear dodge on the border or on the logo, that would be cool- thats what I do for everything. =P

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I kinda messed with it if ya don't mind =P
- Rev

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[Othman]

One of the best messings ever.

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On the uncharted lagoons of anguish, I sail with a canoe made of my sins.

[Sprolf]

The beauty of Kress' work was that the angel was very hard to notice.
It's a lot more apparent in Revan's work, which is perhaps less than optimal.

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[DartStriker]

No no no no! Take that lens flare out now, never ever ever ever ever ever ever use lens flare.

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[Bobthemanofsteel]

I like the lens flare.

But yeah, that looks great Kress, keep up the good work!