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DeathsOverture · 02-04-2010, 06:18 AM,

' Wrote:Jinx, you have GOT to finish the first one. That thing looks like an epic 3600 transport.

Perhaps a Kujira replace? The star wars import needs to burn. Though on second thought, I don't think this looks like it could pass as a transport...

Ah screw it, just make it an "Exploration Cruiser" and give it to the GMG. *innocent face*

Edit: Edited.

sovereign · 02-04-2010, 06:49 AM,

The second one looks like a police baton that ate a Liberty Dreadnought.

It's too nice looking. Yes, Liberty isn't brutal or utterly unyielding or any of those things, but it is a warship. The front in particular needs to be more weaponlike- not "weaponlike" as in the early designs for the Imperial Yacht (which was the sort of ship you could impale stations with), but it needs to look less like a spreading knife and more like a weapon. More dramatic, less "contained" by its armor and more guarded by it, etc. Even making the front bigger might help- Liberty ships tend to taper off, perhaps moving the mass up to the front rather than having it in the middle?