Spirit's Sig (Potential for 100mil)

[Bass_masta992]

There we are..

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[Jimothy]

[...]I like the thingy-ma-jig in the background of the S on the third one, and the way that Spirit's written in the first two [...]

Sorry that wasn't entierly clear, I meant putting Spirit in the top right hand corner, to fit better with the logo's shape.

Also, now I think about it, you missed cropping soldier's shoulders too... if you wouldn't mind :laugh:

And, can the motto be even larger please?

Yeah, very demanding, I know:(

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.

[Bass_masta992]

Shoulders gone finally, could use a little more cleaning up but this is the extent of my work for this afternoon.

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[Jimothy]

Hmm... well, sorry to say but when I said remove shoulders, I meant from the border only, it looks weird without them on his body... but still, it's good... I guess that could come in the 'cleaning up' you said need doing.

Well, Crusader said he might have a shot, so I'll wait for him for a few days, but I'm liking what's here so far...

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.

[Bass_masta992]

I'll repair it tomorrow.

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[Crusader4]

Oh, i see, u want something abstract...
*Opens Photoshop*

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Hate will eat you up from the inside, so hurry up and give your heart to a girl before you get eaten up.

[Crusader4]

Edit : Ahh.... I needs a bit more tweaking, but do u
like it in overall?

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Hate will eat you up from the inside, so hurry up and give your heart to a girl before you get eaten up.

[Jimothy]

Yes, certainly, urm, with exception to the logo and the base of the soldier.

I think with the logo, much as I like the colouration of it, I don't think the letter's work, and I'd decided to go with the filled in logo, because I didnt want Spirit Games written into my sig, so if the letters could disapear, pretty please.

And the soldier, any chance he could have the base of his shoulders in line with the base of the blue rectangular bit, so it didn't look so much like it was just a second image plonked on top?

Ooh, and any chance the right hand side of the rectangular bit could be rounded off to like an oval-ey end? and the solder's shoulders hidden behind it, but his head poking out over the top?
Also, could the blue go a tad darker, and the base of the logo look a little more blue than black?

And as for the tweakings: the effects behind "SPIRIT" don't have a smooth fade off the top, they have an edge to them, and chance for that to be faded out? And the right side of soldier's helmet looks a tad odd...

As with Bass, sorry I'm so demanding, but I know what I like...:D

EDIT: Oh, and I realise I;ve only been critical here, so I'll point out a few things I like too:
The "Spirit" wording and the effect behind it, love the colour and effect, aside from the cropping I mentioned earlier
The latin phrase (Cookie if you know what it means btw) looks great there, it's noticable, readable, and stands out, but doesn't dominate the entire thing.
The abstact-ey-ness, yay! Just yay... (Bit darker though as said above pl0x)
The logo looks great as an edge to the image over there.

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.

[Crusader4]

Wall of text again :mellow:
K, i will do the fixups tomorrow if you don't mind.
i thought there will be alot of things to fix, but what could
you expect form a sigg that has been made in about 10-15 minutes:D

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Hate will eat you up from the inside, so hurry up and give your heart to a girl before you get eaten up.

[Jimothy]

Time's not a problem, you've got till at least the weekend, Bass said summin came up in RL and he wont have time till then, so you've got same time...

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.