Signature Needed: The Most Epic Signature Ever. 200m or more.

[Sprolf]

Korolia: That's really really good looking.
You could take away "Barge Vessel" and put in "DSE)Brilliance," and maybe take away the slogan for DSE. Nice touch, but it's not readily needed. This is a character signature rather than a company signature. The array of objects isn't quite in the order I'd wanted, (which is directly relevant to storyline) but the artistic choices are up to you.

Oldum: Looking a lot better. Actually, it's looking awesome.
Could you shade some of the ships so they fit in with the backgrounds a bit better?
Also, if you could angle the Liberty ships from a common origin point at the centre of Brown, that would probably do wonders for the signature - it's looking better, though. I'd maybe revise some subject matter for the panels to fit things better (see: Texas on the left, Magellan/Cortez and Barge/blackhole on the right). Maybe some debris fields. *shrugs* It's up to you.

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[Korolia]

minor adjustment.
If you wish, I'll try to fix that strange white glow around your character... I'm still trying to find out what is causing it, its nearly invisible on the workbench...

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[Serpentis]

Im done!

Final version

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[DartStriker]

Oldum, what I wouldn't give to get some of your renders...

I'm working on something now. Should be finished in a few days.

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[Oldum]

Oldum: Looking a lot better. Actually, it's looking awesome.
Could you shade some of the ships so they fit in with the backgrounds a bit better?
Also, if you could angle the Liberty ships from a common origin point at the centre of Brown, that would probably do wonders for the signature - it's looking better, though. I'd maybe revise some subject matter for the panels to fit things better (see: Texas on the left, Magellan/Cortez and Barge/blackhole on the right). Maybe some debris fields. *shrugs* It's up to you.

So I've revised the pictures , this is where I got with thisone.



Right now, I have no idea what else to do with this, so I'll try something with my other idea aswell, if you don't like this.

~Oldum

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[Selena_Benitez]

I just re-read the instructions and realised the barge isn't meant to be 'in' the Barrier,oh well...:rolleyes:

First attempt.

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[Sprolf]

Looking good, Oldum.

Selena: The barge is actually really good looking. Like, incredibly awesome.
I really like the signature so far, despite its relative "simplicity."

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[Oldum]

If you want to clean up the second one...
I was actually quite impressed with this, though it's a bit rought. It could use some fixing, namely the repositioning of ships on the bottom one, making them pointing outward from Brown, and maybe making them a bit smaller; also spelling his name right - "Aliester," you missed the e. Again, shading of the ships to make them fit would be wonderful. You did, however, manage to hit a bit of epicness with the lower signature.

Well, I completely revised this idea, maybe it got a bit too crowded, I don't know, it's your's to decide, I like this version but your's is the final word .. or for now, the opinion on what to change.

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[Sprolf]

Woah.






That is woahness.
Just one criticism I have for now... I'd drop the DSE logo and just put the Liberty flag straight behind him.

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