Raul reviewed the questions. "Mmhmmmm, very good. An excellent result like I expected. Welcome to The Brotherhood, hermano." And he moved his hand towards Ramirez for a handshake.
Bio:Sanchez Valiente. Is a decent of Alexander Cross. Sanchez changed his Maiden name to Valiente when he married his wife, because she did not want to lose her last name. Sanchez has always admired his fathers and other elders work and his goal was to follow in his footsteps. But hopefully not to the grave. During high school Sanchez Discovered that his father was not a pure bread corsair, But his mother was. When Sanchez found this out he started to become teased at school, after a few years of this ongoing teasing he brought his fathers Photon blaster to school and healed up his class. After about 3 hrs of this hold up he felt intimidated, he blasted Castel Iago's arm off. He was then arrested and put in to confinement on Tripoli and forced to work with the ships. He then grew a grater knowledge of the ships he worked with and became an exelant pilot insisting that he tests the ships out for faults after he fixes them. At the age where a boy becomes a man Sanchez ventured in to the malvada cloud. What he saw there changed him for the rest of his life. So many ships so many corsair's... Motionless... He gathered up as many artifacts as he could and started to head back to crete when the alarm in his ship went off. "Unknown ships on interseptsion". Hey turned around and Maxed out his Ships drive.. BOOOM!!! The engine failed His ship became motionless just like the others. Some strange look ships slowly past his ship. A big Groaning noise came from out side the ship, it sounded like think mettle being bent. But the noise was slow. Sanchez Wondered what it was, he popped his head up to see what it was, it was those creepy looking ships again, they were bending the ships in to a pulp. A green Light came in through the window and moved across the rear wall of the ship. Sanchez thought to him self "i think they might be scanning my ship". As the Creepy looking ships distenst them self from him he creped back in to the engin room. Pulling out his rench he set to work on fixing the engion. zZZ[size=13][size=14]ZZ The engion started up. The nomads emidatly turned to his ship and moved closer to it. Sanchez raced toward the controls as the ships got closer he slowly reversed. He then saw this strange purple light... "whats that" He though. WAMMMM there was a Nomad Mother ship right there. His jaw drooped in amazement. He flawed it and headed in the direction of Crete. "In coming missile!" said the computer. he let of a few countermeasure's the missile went straight past them. "Damn!!" he screamed, Bashing the dashboard of the Titan. He got up and raced over to the artifacts. Only needing to collect one to pass he shoved that in the escape pod. He then raced back to the controls of the titan and turned it so that when he ejected from the ship he would shoot straight at Crete. He could hear his hull buckling He raced to his escape pod. Bang His top find had riped of and the ship was decompresureiseing he was hanging on the a pipe that was sticking out the side of the ship but was slowly being sucked in to the ship and out. The First artafact that was in his pad had gone out of the ship. the others followed. He let go of the pole to grab one when his seat riped off and pluged the hole. With the artifact in his hot hands he rased to the escape pod. The chair buckled and flew out in to space. He was holding on to the door of his pod as he felt him self losing grip. His on board computer plugged the hole next as it flew out of its sockets. He fell to the ground. He then jumped in his pod, and hit the eject button, bang he headed towards crete. He then saw his beloved titan explode and the purple blob nomad things disappear. It was 3months before a ruteen patrol picked him up. He was taken to crete to receve his manhood and became a full Corsair. But whilst he was out on his mission his father had passed away and it was said that he was delearias that he took his titan and flew away in to space. Sanchez's mother gave him a recording of his fathers last words.
"My beloved friends *dieing cough, dieing cough* I do not wish to die in hospital, im going to live out my last few moments *Gasps for air* in my ship doing what i love most. *dieing cough, dieing cough* I... I... *gasp for air* I......... *silence*.
Sanchez staired at the recording, the silence was eerie. Sanchez new his father couldent have gone far, a system or 2. He then approced the elders of the brotherhood, and explaind to them why he wanted to join The Brotherhood. He said. "Elders of The Brotherhood *bows in respect*, you may know me, im Alexanders son. I wish to join The Brotherhood because i wish to search for my farther. But i can not do that alone, I need resources and most of all, i need friends."
He then wated for there reply.
Elder Alexander Cross Wrote:Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds
whats up! my name real name is jay. ive been interested in joining the corsairs for awhile, and ive now gotten around to finally posting in this thread. =P anyways, the characters name is gabriel. he is 22, and was born a corsair, but just hasnt joined any groups per se. he has always piloted fighters, except for his first ship which was a small freighter (although he is anxious to try his luck with a gunboat some day). he doesnt know what happened to his real parents, as he never knew them. he was raised by a family that was close to his parents, although they were killed before he was old enough for them to tell him what happened to his real parents. he was 12 when they died, and he has been on his own since. he got a job cleaning ships, and after a year of doing that he befriended a corsair pilot, and he began taking lessons from the pilot. soon after he was done with his lessons, he began to make runs with his friend (who smuggled artifacts). when he was 15, they ran into trouble in the form of several outcast pilots on a freeport, where his friend was killed. the outcasts let gabriel go, and he took control of the ship his friend had previously owned. he immediately headed back to crete, where he began to work for a group of corsairs who would pay him to hunt bounty hunters. he soon after had enough money to buy a fighter (which was much better than the small freighter he had been piloting as far as killing bounty hunters). he has been diong that to this day.
yeah i updated my RP story 2:Pcompleatly changed it:P
Elder Alexander Cross Wrote:Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds
Raul checked his messages on his datapad. He was surprised two messages were untouched until now. Two recruits, Gabriel and Sanchez Valiente. He then walked to the Recruitment office, where both waited talking. "You must be the two recruits around here. I'm Raul D. Yanez, one of the Elders in TBH." He stopped for a short time. Sanchez looked very familiar to him. Yeah, didn't his message say that he was the son of Alexander Cross? He never knew Elder Alexander had a son. "Sorry for the delay, but let's not lose more time. I'll show you how to use the recruitment terminals..."
5 minutes later both sat at one of the terminals each, concentrating on the questions. 20 minutes later Sanchez Valiente passed the answers over to Raul. The questions were all right, he was amazed at the detail of the answers. "Welcome to The Brotherhood, Sanchez. I'm sure you'll follow your father's footsteps."
//Sent you the questions, Jcfire. Good luck.
// And welcome back to TBH, Tris.:)
Elder Alexander Cross Wrote:Darkness is a friend, an ally. Darkness allows us to understand others, to see what they value when they believe no one else is looking. It allows us to be honest with ourselves, to express those values that we would disavow in the light. The light blinds us. It is only in the dark that we see clearly, and there is a great dark hidden among these worlds
You wanna here my story, here is my damn story. I am Vincent Valentine, the Son of a Murdered father, and the child of killed mother. I was born on Freeport 9. My father was Ross Valentine, a soldier in the Corsair Military, and my mother a Zoner. At the age of 10 we were on our way to a Luxury liner Hawai in the Sigma 19 Sector when we got attacked by a group of 5 Outcast raiders. Although my father pleaded for a ceasefire as he had his wife and child on board, the outcast drilled his titan. He took down 3 of the 5 stillettos and then a missile tore through our cargo bay. The Titan was dead in the water. We were boarded and taken prisoner. We were taken to some secret outcast station, it might as well have been hell. My mother and father were taken into a room where he was tied up, and they had their way with my mother, for 9 hours. She died, reaching out to my father who could do nothing to help here. After she died the Outcast turned to my father and told him that they would raise me as an Outcast, and his family name would be lost. That was the last thing he heard as the bullet tore through his head.
I was fortunate, some may say, as a Liberty Battle Group attacked the station 2 hours later, and I was found on board, alongside my dead parents. Mistaken for an Outcast I was taken to Manhattan, where I was placed with a foster family. When I was 15, I entered a Bar one night, and came face to face with a Outcast. He was much older and stronger than me, but he did not see the gun I stole from my Foster LSF Father. As the LSF took me away I felt a satisfaction looking at the bloodied Outcast on the floor. One down, I thought to myself.
I have just been released from Prison, after spending 5 years in juvenile detention for murder. I have managed to get my hands on a Starflier, and will leave for Crete tonight, where I am to take my place alongside my Brothers, and have my Revenge on the Outcasts.
Take me Brothers, for I will be a sharp edged sword.
Lucendez left the doctor's office clutching his medication in one hand and waving half-heartedly to the doctor with the other. The Elder was just about to go home when he dropped by the Brotherhood recruiting office to check on the new applicants.
The one identified as Vince was just finished with his test, and the Elder looked over the answers.
"My word young man, this is impressive! Well done! You are accepted into TBH, brother. Don't forget to check in at the private comms channel at www.corsairbrotherhood.com. Oh, and meet either an Elder or Centurion in space and we'll get you loaded out with your Titan and equipment. Plus the bonus 20 million creds."
The Elder shook the brother's hand firmly. This was a proud day for him, seeing the fire in the young man's eyes.
"The thirteen saloons that had lined the one street of Seney had not left a trace. The foundations of the Mansion House hotel stuck up above the ground. The stone was chipped and split by the fire. It was all that was left of the town of Seney. Even the surface had been burned off the ground.
Nick looked at the burned-over stretch of hillside, where he had expected to find the scattered houses of the town and then walked down the railroad track to the bridge over the river. The river was there."
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