(Another) Core Dreadnought (proposal/collaboration help)

[Piombo65]

I loved the wing idea of the first.
The others with a single wing were weird and boring.
Also the one with the wings on top was too much like a submarine or SCRA Typhoon which is really off putting and makes it feel more like a SCRA ship.

Try adding wings similar to that of the snubs maybe, like the GB. At least somewhere. They don't have to be huge.

Thank you very much for the feedback.

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[Felsvar]

I removed that buff you didn't want and now you want more buff?

When did I say that? The whole entire front is in need of major reconstruction.

[Piombo65]

I removed that buff you didn't want and now you want more buff?

When did I say that? The whole entire front is in need of major reconstruction.

They didn't want the fwg so I removed it. Maybe I'll add something else.

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[Piombo65]

What am I doing?

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[Strichev]

Dunno, kind of hard to get a feeling for the model from that perspective. The front looks like it might be a container of some sort. It also sort of reminds me of detached zeppelin gondola. It somehow doesn't match the rest of the ship. But all this could be due to the angle.

Perhaps you could remodel the top of the front, so as to break up the current gondola like shape? That way it might blend in with the rest of the model more.

[Piombo65]

I'm a bit afraid

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[Felsvar]

I cannot really say much to just one image. Can you just update the p3d link and post the model so other can see deeper on what is happening?

[Piombo65]

It's still WIP. Just thinking about how to connect something and I'll update.

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[Piombo65]

https://p3d.in/0etl9

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[Thunderer]

Very nice. At least this one doesn't look like a giant space car. What are the slabs on the top for, though?

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