Spirit's Sig (Potential for 100mil)

[Jimothy]

OK, hate to be pedantic here, any chance "TANTUM IGNARUS ES GAUISUS" could be made less transparent. Not totally opaque, but just a bit easier to read (You might be able to read it, I just cant see very well...:()

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.

[Loken]

No problem, it's your signature after all. Hows this?

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[Bass_masta992]

@ Bass_Masta

* Urm, I'd love the way you've got SPIRIT going down aswell, but perhaps have it so the letters are still the right way up? But love the effect on it... (Oh, and maybe make it bigger, and further away from the corner, or put it on a chopped off corner, so it overlaps the image border?
* And I like the way Mr. Soldier's in the centre of the swirly blue thing, but same as with Loken, I think the blue's a bit too light over the right hand side of the image
* Also, the S logo, methink's it's loo large, and I know it's not the nicest think to blend, but I'd rather it as a foreground image...
* Oh, and hate to be quite so critical here, but the Tantum Ignarus Es Gauisus bit has a weird looking rectangle behind it... could this be removed please?

SPIRIT with the letters facing the same direction looks terrible, because of how the font is designed. I can remove the effect altogether if need be, but I find it rather appealing.

Regardless, I'll adjust the signature with the other changes you want to see how it looks.

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[Jimothy]

OK, Image isn't loading, I'll holler at you on Skype...

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.

[Bass_masta992]

Do any of these get you a better idea of what you're going for? personally, I find the first tries at 'Spirit' to look better, but I want your opinion on these.

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[Loken]

After talking to Spirit on skype here's my final submission:

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[Jimothy]

I have to admit Bass, I like the thingy-ma-jig in the background of the S on the third one, and the way that Spirit's written in the first two... oh, and any chance to chop his shoulder off so they don't show through the border?
And the motto, I don't realy like it where it is, is there any chance of brining it inside the image and I think it could be larger... perhaps having TANTUM IGNARUS above soldier's head, then ES GAUISUS next to him? (On separate lines if needed)

Oh, and Bass, sorry for ignoring you, I just didn't see your post there... my bad:(

EDIT: THIS WAS MY 500th POST WHOOOOOO!!! *Cough* (Not that such things matter ¬_¬)

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.

[Bass_masta992]

I have to admit Bass, I like the thingy-ma-jig in the background of the S on the third one, and the way that Spirit's written in the first two... oh, and any chance to chop his shoulder off so they don't show through the border?
And the motto, I don't realy like it where it is, is there any chance of brining it inside the image and I think it could be larger... perhaps having TANTUM IGNARUS above soldier's head, then ES GAUISUS next to him? (On separate lines if needed)

I'll combine the text and the 3rd's 3d render then. I stopped liking the position of the latin phrase after I removed the black square as well. Do you want me to upscale it as well?

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[Jimothy]

[...] Do you want me to upscale it as well?

That means make bigger right? In which case Yus, I think I said that, if no, what you mean?

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I was formerly know as Spiritar.

It's been a while.

[Bass_masta992]

That means make bigger right? In which case Yus, I think I said that, if no, what you mean?

Yeah it means make it bigger. I'll be sure to do that.

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