Whiteshark: Enemy on the radar! Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***."Where".[I].{am}.(?).*** Whiteshark: o my God! Nomad! Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***.=who=."are".+you+.(?).***
*Whiteshark starts to run away (I swear! He is escaped!)*
You can find DSAce.log in C:\Users\Username\My documents\My games\Freelancer
Thats where all the logs are stored
This Galaxy is vast; its wonders and beauty are almost unfathomable. But the galaxy also hides dark secrets, some of which have lain dormant since the beginning of time itself. There is a danger in secrets, both in seeking and in knowing. Some things are meant to be hidden from view. Some mysteries defy understanding, and sometimes even the things we think we know are untrue. Some secrets should remain untouched.
There's no real RP scenes I can see there, just some pieces of your phrases, which actually hard to even call mindshare. Yeah better check the post above, and when you have done long RP scene then you bring it over here.
As for your nomadspeech. It's normal english just with addation of random symbols. Something like:
***...-We- (are) &Bored& and ^we^ :drink: +coffee+ ...(smile) $will$ you -offer- me 'a' +cookie+ ?...*** is definitely not Nomad RP.
(03-15-2016, 01:41 PM)Dimon Wrote: There's no real RP scenes I can see there, just some pieces of your phrases, which actually hard to even call mindshare. Yeah better check the post above, and when you have done long RP scene then you bring it over here.
As for your nomadspeech. It's normal english just with addation of random symbols. Something like:
***...-We- (are) &Bored& and ^we^ :drink: +coffee+ ...(smile) $will$ you -offer- me 'a' +cookie+ ?...*** is definitely not Nomad RP.
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Okay @Piombo65 . On big thing that needs to change. Stop using all those symbols. It makes your sentence hard to read, takes a lot more effort to read and it's far more complicated. Use symbols less frequently. I personally only use a few symbols and I'll let you know what I use. Many other K'Hara use them for the same reasons but do feel free to use them slightly differently.
* - Asterix are usually used to start Nomad sentences. It's a tail tail sign that a Nomad is trying to speak to you using Telepathy be it via visions or straight out talking. Asterix can also be used to emphasize words just like the above but it's less commonly seen.
' - The apostrophe is more commonly used when saying who you're speaking to. Nomads tend to use possessive pronouns a lot when describing people. Possessive pronoun are like Ours and Yours which are the most commonly used. Ours represents I or Me and Yours usually represents You.
" ~ . - The Speech Quotes, Tidle and Period are genially used to emphasize words that you want to stand out. People can assign these letters to things like nouns but again that's personal preference. The Period is often seen less since it can make sentences look cluttered.
[ ] ( ) - A straight bracket and curved brackets are usually saved for emotions and sometimes for calling people. Usually for emotions they're at the end of the sentence and they usually look like [Anger] [Joy] or even sometimes [!!] for excitement or being alert or [??] for curiosity or that you do not understand something. A question basically.
{ } - This weird bracket thing is used for both calling someone by a name, identifying a warship or an object (Like {Metal Husk Alexia} ) or it's more commonly seen when people write visions. Visions are a good way of getting your RP across if the person you're talking to isn't fully understanding what you're saying. In visions you don't have to use and quotation/symbols which makes it easier for both people to understand and write.
Other then that, not many other symbols/quotation are used. Try not to write a Period after every single word as it makes things look cluttered and certainly cut down on quotation and symbols like + = # @ £ $ %.
Your sentence structure is very basic. 3 word sentences isn't going to get you into K'Hara but it's a good start. One big suggestion I have for you is if you're struggling to think of something, think of the sentence if English first. Then, go over the sentence and replace a few words with other words that describes said thing and then put a few symbols into it. A good example of how to make sentences was made by @"Scourgeclaw". It can be found here and I suggest you read all of it.
Obviously Scourge has customised his language to slightly differently to what I would do but customisation is good.
If you have any questions then feel free to ask here or in the Morph chat.
@Dimon Stop. Please just stop. People can use English sentences if they want to. Just because it's written in straight English doesn't mean it's not Nom RP. We just prefer that you use slightly different words to every day words.
(03-15-2016, 02:19 PM)Snoopy Wrote: Okay @Piombo65 . On big thing that needs to change. Stop using all those symbols. It makes your sentence hard to read, takes a lot more effort to read and it's far more complicated. Use symbols less frequently. I personally only use a few symbols and I'll let you know what I use. Many other K'Hara use them for the same reasons but do feel free to use them slightly differently.
* - Asterix are usually used to start Nomad sentences. It's a tail tail sign that a Nomad is trying to speak to you using Telepathy be it via visions or straight out talking. Asterix can also be used to emphasize words just like the above but it's less commonly seen.
' - The apostrophe is more commonly used when saying who you're speaking to. Nomads tend to use possessive pronouns a lot when describing people. Possessive pronoun are like Ours and Yours which are the most commonly used. Ours represents I or Me and Yours usually represents You.
" ~ . - The Speech Quotes, Tidle and Period are genially used to emphasize words that you want to stand out. People can assign these letters to things like nouns but again that's personal preference. The Period is often seen less since it can make sentences look cluttered.
[ ] ( ) - A straight bracket and curved brackets are usually saved for emotions and sometimes for calling people. Usually for emotions they're at the end of the sentence and they usually look like [Anger] [Joy] or even sometimes [!!] for excitement or being alert or [??] for curiosity or that you do not understand something. A question basically.
{ } - This weird bracket thing is used for both calling someone by a name, identifying a warship or an object (Like {Metal Husk Alexia} ) or it's more commonly seen when people write visions. Visions are a good way of getting your RP across if the person you're talking to isn't fully understanding what you're saying. In visions you don't have to use and quotation/symbols which makes it easier for both people to understand and write.
Other then that, not many other symbols/quotation are used. Try not to write a Period after every single word as it makes things look cluttered and certainly cut down on quotation and symbols like + = # @ £ $ %.
Your sentence structure is very basic. 3 word sentences isn't going to get you into K'Hara but it's a good start. One big suggestion I have for you is if you're struggling to think of something, think of the sentence if English first. Then, go over the sentence and replace a few words with other words that describes said thing and then put a few symbols into it. A good example of how to make sentences was made by @"Scourgeclaw". It can be found here and I suggest you read all of it.
Obviously Scourge has customised his language to slightly differently to what I would do but customisation is good.
If you have any questions then feel free to ask here or in the Morph chat.
@Dimon Stop. Please just stop. People can use English sentences if they want to. Just because it's written in straight English doesn't mean it's not Nom RP. We just prefer that you use slightly different words to every day words.
Ok! Thanks for informations. For me could be better the same signs that you used except the [ that I would change in (
*It appears some guys, a Outcast, a... "CR" (?... Colonial ID but the strange name as IFF), a Liberty and some freelancers (If I remember...)*
[16.03.2016 19:30:32] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***where.'I'.am.(?)***
[16.03.2016 19:30:40] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***who.are.'yours'.(?)***
[16.03.2016 19:30:54] D9|Lazurite.: That Outcast... Pretty one who shouldn't be here.
[16.03.2016 19:31:04] CR|-Shadowstep: Well well well. A nomad, and a libery agent
[16.03.2016 19:31:39] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***what....ppening.(?)***
[16.03.2016 19:31:53] Death: Janissary was put out of action by CR|-Shadowstep (Gun).
[16.03.2016 19:31:54] D9|Lazurite.: Great one.
[16.03.2016 19:32:10] CR|-Shadowstep: Outcast, You will stop right now!
[16.03.2016 19:32:20] D9|Lazurite.: Better end this up.
[16.03.2016 19:32:56] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***.....hey!.don't.....ouch....my..-friends-.(angry)***
[16.03.2016 19:33:55] Death: W@rden was put out of action by D9|Lazurite. (Gun).
[16.03.2016 19:34:06] D9|Lazurite.: That one shouldn't ever exists..
WARNING!!! I'M SO SORRY!!W@rden was the Outcast and i watch D9|Lazurite attack him, so I engaged the outcast too! Stupidly I forgot the "stable" relations with the Outcasts and we are eliminated him! I offered him $ 2 million as a "personal penalty" but he rejected them diplomatically. it was a terrible mistake that I will not do it again!
[16.03.2016 19:34:27] CR|-Shadowstep: Now now
[16.03.2016 19:34:46] CR|-Shadowstep: Im detecting strange readings from your ship
[16.03.2016 19:34:46] D9|Lazurite.: better get lost
[16.03.2016 19:34:52] D9|Lazurite.: Really?
[16.03.2016 19:34:54] D9|Lazurite.: Why is that?
[16.03.2016 19:34:55] CR|-Shadowstep: Yes
[16.03.2016 19:35:00] D9|Lazurite.: or no
[16.03.2016 19:35:06] D9|Lazurite.: we'll kill that one prolly too
[16.03.2016 19:35:10] Madze.Nabucodonosor: what we doing?
[16.03.2016 19:35:12] CR|-Shadowstep: Maybe because of some...alien origin tech you are using
[16.03.2016 19:35:25] D9|Lazurite.: Maybe you misunderstood something..
[16.03.2016 19:35:32] D9|Lazurite.: Look what's behind you.
[16.03.2016 19:35:37] CR|-Shadowstep: I'm sure
[16.03.2016 19:36:03] D9|Lazurite.: And?
[16.03.2016 19:36:03] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***what.....'yours'.....king.(?)***
[16.03.2016 19:36:06] CR|-Shadowstep: There is a nomad. Yes
[16.03.2016 19:36:16] D9|Lazurite.: And?.
[16.03.2016 19:36:26] D9|Lazurite.: What attachs me with him?
[16.03.2016 19:36:31] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***why.'yours'.maked....-metal-.(?)***
[16.03.2016 19:36:52] CR|-Shadowstep: Because we are humans and use metal things to kick you from here nomad!
[16.03.2016 19:37:00] D9|Lazurite.: It's also a young one.
[16.03.2016 19:37:14] D9|Lazurite.: Well.
[16.03.2016 19:37:29] D9|Lazurite.: ***... "Theirs" -mistake- ...***
[16.03.2016 19:44:14] Death: CR|-Shadowstep was put out of action by D9|Lazurite. (Gun). (*and I*)
[16.03.2016 19:44:32] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***-humans-.....rinated.(!).***
[16.03.2016 19:44:45] D9|Lazurite.: ***...(amusement)...***
[24.03.2016 15:50:28] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***(curious)***
[24.03.2016 15:50:56] [blank]: Unknown ship get out of this sector
[24.03.2016 15:51:11] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***why***
[24.03.2016 15:51:28] [blank]: you are in perimeter of Red hessians
[24.03.2016 15:51:32] [blank]: get out of this sector
[24.03.2016 15:51:36] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***who.are.'yours'.(?)***
[24.03.2016 15:55:36] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***what.....'yours'.....king.(?)***
[24.03.2016 15:56:09] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***why.'yours'.made.....-metal-.(?)***
*I try to take time... there are one Bomber and a stargrazer (level 25) (//it's forbidden attack a level 29 or low character but togheter the bomber he has engaged me). So I know that they are weaks but I'm too pessimist in this game. :|*
[24.03.2016 15:56:32] [blank]: This is last warning, Leave this sector NOW !
[24.03.2016 15:57:58] [blank]: leave
[24.03.2016 15:58:25] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***(mah).....omber...'and'....a......-recruit-...
[24.03.2016 15:58:26] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***
[24.03.2016 15:58:31] [blank]: our scan showed us you have some of our pilots in your cargo
[24.03.2016 15:58:37] [blank]: drop them here
[24.03.2016 15:58:58] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***why***
[24.03.2016 15:59:14] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***(mah)***
[24.03.2016 15:59:17] [blank]: Drop your cargo
[24.03.2016 16:02:08] Death: [blank] was put out of action by Madze.Nabucodonosor (Gun).
[24.03.2016 16:02:13] Death: Joseph_Goebels was put out of action by Madze.Nabucodonosor (Gun).
[24.03.2016 16:02:23] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***too....-weaks-....***
[24.03.2016 16:02:37] Madze.Nabucodonosor: ***humans....rminated***