Jonathan Sinclair -Resurgence Feedback

[Matthews]

Please feel free to give some Feedback if you want. It's my first story written in English and for Discovery. I'm always looking to further my efforts. Thank you.

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[Traxit]

I haven't read the story but from first impressions I was deterred from even attempting to read it due to the lack of;
Formatting
Proper Paragraphs
(Slighty) annoying bodytext font - I recommend to use Sans-Serif fonts such as Open-Sans
Colour coding dialogue

The forums have a lot of tools to make your posts more accessible and readable - I highly recommend playing with them.

PS: Personally, it's half the fun of crafting stories and RP posts.

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[Matthews]

I haven't read the story but from first impressions I was deterred from even attempting to read it due to the lack of;
Formatting
Proper Paragraphs
(Slighty) annoying bodytext font - I recommend to use Sans-Serif fonts such as Open-Sans
Colour coding dialogue

The forums have a lot of tools to make your posts more accessible and readable - I highly recommend playing with them.

PS: Personally, it's half the fun of crafting stories and RP posts.

Thank you. I've added propper paragraphs and edited it so it should be a lot more readable now.

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