Bump. Adding and editing work all the time, keep the comments coming. Positive feedback fuels my motivation. Negative feedback produces excellent work in the long run.
Try not having hackneyed and totally pointless things like the RAF in a world set a thousand years from now. Fact check: the Battle of Britain ended ages ago, and Bretonian fish-ships aren't called the Spitfire.
From a dev perspective, it'd help to know what Bretonia's interests are in respect to developing out existing systems and scouting out additional worlds. I had a talk with Alvin on this a while ago - seems a ring/lane combi to Sprague would be desirable, along with a pair of systems around the Bretonian core instead of that Anglia and Cambria...
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I really do like everything in the topic. That's purely epic, keep it up, and I hope that we'll see more of these. However, here's a bit of "criticism" from me. Since Sirian Bretonia is some sort modernization of Industrial Revolution - era England, all the units pictured there should be more... hmm... steampunk (?). You know, XVI century units, somehow teleported to Sirius. But that's my own opinion. Good luck :)
' Wrote:May I suggest adding a list of notable Bretonian colonies outside of Bretonian space, such as Port Jackson and stuff in the Omega 3 system?
It's on the to-do list.
' Wrote:Try not having hackneyed and totally pointless things like the RAF in a world set a thousand years from now. Fact check: the Battle of Britain ended ages ago, and Bretonian fish-ships aren't called the Spitfire.
It's background information, doesn't harm you.
' Wrote:From a dev perspective, it'd help to know what Bretonia's interests are in respect to developing out existing systems and scouting out additional worlds. I had a talk with Alvin on this a while ago - seems a ring/lane combi to Sprague would be desirable, along with a pair of systems around the Bretonian core instead of that Anglia and Cambria...
From a devs? Well what I write is not going to be 100% accurate, however I do plan on doing that and once I have it'll be check and re-checked from various outside parties and then it could be considered 100% accurate.
' Wrote:I really do like everything in the topic. That's purely epic, keep it up, and I hope that we'll see more of these. However, here's a bit of "criticism" from me. Since Sirian Bretonia is some sort modernization of Industrial Revolution - era England, all the units pictured there should be more... hmm... steampunk (?). You know, XVI century units, somehow teleported to Sirius. But that's my own opinion. Good luck :)
I see what you mean but this is space, we wouldn't be going around in "steampunk". Plus the images are more whatever I can find at the time. Suggest any images if you want.
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Just to note, there's a few changes you could make to the Army Ranks here.
Staff Sergeant could be Staff/Colour Sergeant, seeing as the distinction changes based on whether you're serving in infantry or armour regiments.
Warrant Officer should probably be Warrant Officer Class 2 / WO2. Also, I've never heard of Conductor, but I'm fairly sure RSM or WO1 should be there. I don't think QM is an NCO rank either - most Quartermasters seem to be commissioned officers. Just checked that here too, and it seems to be the case.
Also, Vogel - the RAF would be there for atmospheric superiority purposes, battlefield troop support and intra-planetary troop movements. Take a Chimera up against a purpose built atmospheric dogfighter and see how far you get.
Also, Ava, I'm working on a document about the colonies you may be interested in.
Thinking of finishing this. Wanting to try and cover:
/> Planet Cities - write ups and images. In-game facts/pictures and concepts.
/> System descriptions, including system history, what each has and descriptions of that, artwork and details similar to the wiki.
/> In-game hints and advice such as good Bretonian trade runs, mining, jump holes, fasted way to get around.
/> Factions within Bretonia and their relation to one another
/> Artwork on events within Bretonia. Players submitting their most stunning screenshots and collecting them within a post.
/> Increase in BAF information such as the Army, Air Force and Navy.
/> A write up on a few civilian Bretonian companies that aren't space-used. Such as technology firms, transport and more that are all planet-side.
I would also like some help, from everyone, I am not in-game and so have no money, but will be asking for 'charity work' with maybe the rewards being, mentioned in the credits of the finish product.
So yeah, just a heads up and if anyone wants to help, hit me up!